SUSAN ELIA MACNEAL: October 15.
That's the date I'm working toward.
That's when I need to hand in Maggie Hope #5, Mrs. Roosevelt's Confidante, to my editor.
Less than a month away.
And oh, lovely readers, it's not pretty around here.
There is much head-scratching, hair-pulling, and gnashing of teeth as I try to finish and tie up all the loose ends.
Right now there are a lot of loose ends. But it's all right. I have faith. And also two week-long solo writing retreats before the end.
At any rate, here's a snippet from the beginning of the novel. In it we see President Roosevelt and First Lady Eleanor Roosevelt together on December 22, 1941 — the day Winston Churchill and his staff (including Maggie Hope) will arrive in Washington, D.C.
Enjoy!
xxSusan
It
was morning, and Eleanor Roosevelt opened the door of the President’s bedroom
without knocking. There she stood, glaring, hands on her hips. “Franklin,” she demanded
in high-pitched tones just short of dulcet, “why didn’t you tell me Winston
Churchill’s coming to the White House?”
Mrs. Roosevelt was a slim, tall, middle-aged woman
who seemed constantly in motion—except for rare moments such as this. Her thick
grey hair was pulled into a low chignon. She was already dressed for they day,
wearing a simple suit and low-heeled shoes.
President Franklin
Delano Roosevelt, armed with newspapers, mail, and messages, was taking
breakfast in bed. The morning headlines were far from reassuring: 80 JAPANESE
TRANSPORTS APPEAR OFF LUZON, U.S. SANK OR DAMAGED 14 U-BOATS IN ATLANTIC, and HITLER
OUSTS ARMY HEAD—TAKES FULL CONTROL. As he read, he fed tiny pieces of bacon to
his small black Scottish terrier, Fala, curled up on the bed beside him.
The President shrugged. He’d known the British P.M.
was coming ever since the attack on Pearl Harbor, nearly two weeks before—but
for security reasons, had kept the news to himself. At fifty-one, Franklin
Roosevelt was a large, robust man—that is, except for his legs, which were
paralyzed by polio. He had a large oblong face with a jutting jaw and silver
pince-nez spectacles balanced on the bridge of his nose. He kept his Camel
cigarette in an ivory holder between his teeth, held at a jaunty angle.
Mrs. Roosevelt continued, “Well, one of the first
things we must do is remove all the art depicting the War of 1812. That would
be a horrible gaffe.”
The President reached
down to stroke Fala’s silky ears. “Yes, dear.” The dog wagged her tail, then
hoping for more bacon.
“I think we can keep the Revolutionary war
paintings. But perhaps take down President Washington.”
“Washington? Keep him up—Churchill has high
respect for the Founding Fathers, so I’ve read. And even if he doesn’t,
Washington’s still our first President.” Franklin looked at Eleanor over the
wire rims of his spectacles. “He’s a guest, yes—and now our ally—but we’re
going to be negotiating quite a few things while he’s here. Might not be a bad
idea to remind him who won the Revolutionary War.” He slipped a morsel of bacon
to Fala, who wagged her tail in appreciation.
“But why didn’t you tell me, Franklin? And I can’t find Mrs. Nesbitt anywhere. What are
we going to serve on such short notice? She’s a mediocre enough cook as it is.
If only I’d known….”
“Now, Eleanor, all that little woman would do even if
she were here, is to tell Fields what we can tell him ourselves right now.” He
looked to his butler. “Fields, have your staff prepare the bedrooms for the
Prime Minister and some of his party. And if you see Mrs. Nesbitt, tell her to
find Mrs. Roosevelt. We’ll need dinner for twenty at eight, maybe nine.”
“Yes, sir.”
Eleanor blinked. “My word, Franklin, I don’t think
you realize how much work a visit from a foreign dignitary takes! And with
Tommy on Christmas vacation, Blanche didn’t show up for work today. She didn’t
even call—it’s not like her.”
“I’m sure she’s fine. And let the
staff take care of everything. It’s their job.”
Mr. Fields had waited. “Anything
else, Sir? Ma’am?”
“Thank you. That’s all,” said the
President. Fields left, his tread heavy on the hall floors.
“As First Lady, it all reflects on
me. And in addition to my column, I have a press conference today—”
“I know you’ll do a bang-up job,
Babs.”
His use of her nickname softened her
edge a bit. But not her focus. “But Tommy’s visiting her family for Christmas.”
Malvina “Tommy” Thompson was the secretary who usually took dictation for the
First Lady’s “My Day” newspaper columns.
The President kept his eyes on the newspaper, but the
First Lady would not be put off. “And Franklin, have you had a chance to look
at my letter to the Governor of Virginia, regarding the impending execution of
Wendell Cotton?”
The President sighed. “If you
haven’t noticed, dear, we’re at war. I have more on my plate with the Japs and
the Huns than I know what to do with. And now, with Winston coming….”
“A man’s life is at stake!” Franklin Delano
Roosevelt was President, but Eleanor Roosevelt was the matriarch of the family
and a political force in her own right. Not only was she the President’s eyes
and ears for places his wheelchair couldn’t take him, but she was a moral influence
of her own.
“I know.” Roosevelt looked up at his
wife, grey-blue eyes serious behind his pince-nez. “But I can’t afford to rile
up those boys from Dixie right now, just as we’re entering this war. We all need
to all pull together to win—North and
South. I can’t afford to antagonize a nation that only recently wanted to throw
me out of office and elect an isolationist.”
“Shouldn’t your ‘together’ include
men like Wendell Cotton? What about the Negros?” Eleanor walked over and sat at
the foot of her husband’s bed. “This is their war, too, you know.”
“You know what they say about us in
the South—‘you kiss the Negroes, I’ll kiss the Jews, and we’ll stay in the
White House As long as we choose.’ And I simply can’t afford to alienate Dixie any
more, especially now that we’re at war.”
Roosevelt sighed. “I’m doing the
best I can, Babs.”
Mrs. Roosevelt knew when the President had had
enough. “I’m going to put Mr. Churchill in the Rose bedroom, what do you
think?”
“Perfecto, my dear.” He didn’t look
up, but his voice was a few degrees warmer.
Mrs. Roosevelt’s gaze went to the
cluster of photographs on the fireplace’s mantel. Their boys were grown and in
the military. They wouldn’t be home for Christmas this year. “It’s been two
weeks since Pearl Harbor. It’s so strange to have Christmas with the country at
war. And without the boys,” she said. “And without your mother, too, of
course.”
They both looked to the President’s
black armband, worn in honor of his mother, Sara Delano Roosevelt, who had died
that September.
“And your brother.” The President
cleared his throat. “Well, I have the feeling the atmosphere will be
considerably energized when The Prime gets here.” He signed a few documents
with a flourish, then looked up at his wife again, the twinkle back in his
eyes. “You have no idea how much energy he has.”
“Indeed.”
“Well, then I’ll do everything to
get ready for him and his staff. We’ll put him and his detective and valet up
here, and the rest can stay at the Mayflower Hotel—I’ll have Mr. Fields call
over. And what do you think he’d like for dinner tonight when he gets in?”
“I’m sure anything you choose will
be splendid, my darling. Just make sure to have plenty of wine and scotch on
hand. The Prime likes his whiskey. And of course I’ll make Martinis during
Children’s Hour.”
Eleanor grimaced. Her father had
been an alcoholic and alcoholism had just claimed the life of her brother. She
rarely touched spirits herself, only indulging in one of her husband’s
Old-Fashioneds once in a blue moon. “I’ll see what I can do.”
The President pulled a red cord that
would summon his valet. “I’m going to the airport to greet Winston and his
crew.”
“You’re going yourself?” Eleanor
sounded worried. “Can’t you send someone else and then greet him here?”
“The Prime and his staff have been on a ship dodging Nazi submarines for two weeks—and they’ve only just docked in Boston. I think the least I can do to show up at the airport.”
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Roosevelt smiled, one of those
megawatt smiles that routinely made the newspapers’ front pages. “Babs, if I
see Blanche, I’ll be sure to send her your way.”
What a perfectly wonderful piece! Now I can't wait to read the rest of the book . . . .
ReplyDeleteYour depiction of Franklin and Eleanor is a perfect fit with what I've been seeing all week in the Ken Burns-PBS documentary.
I came to the series late so read all the books one right after the other and am now more than ready for this one. And I, too, am watching "The Roosevelts" on PBS and this is a wonderful continuation of what I've learned about them.
ReplyDeleteWord to the wise: Fala was male.
ReplyDeleteGrandma Cootie beat me to it, but I was going to say your timing is impeccable with the Roosevelts on PBS. Everyone will be dying for more about them!
ReplyDeletethe two week-long retreats sound like exactly what you need to wrap things up--good luck Susan!
I've been watching The Roosevelts TOO on PBS... and was wishing there was ore... then woke up to this! Terrific, Susan, and messy though it is how great to be nearing THE END instead of figuring it all out from the start again.
ReplyDeleteThanks, everyone. Fala's a boy? Ok, got it.
ReplyDeleteYes, the timing of the Ken Burns series was terrific and so inspiring. If you're hungry for more on the Roosevelts, his National Park series should basically be titled "The Roosevelts and the National Parks."
Yes, Fala was male! http://history1900s.about.com/od/1940s/qt/fala.htm
ReplyDeleteI LOVE your books! Now go write. I am with ya, sister. Loose ends. But it's like a Rubik's cube. CLick, click, clic, and each bit snaps into place, until it's perfect.
ReplyDeletexoxoo
Wonderful. You captured them perfectly. I could hear their voices!
ReplyDeleteLOVE the excerpt, Susan!! Can't wait to read the finished book--and I know you will get it finished and all the pieces will snap into place. Then you'll wonder how you could ever NOT have seen how it would all work out! xox debs
ReplyDeleteIs anyone NOT watching "The Roosevelts" on PBS? Susan, I'm in the middle of The Prime Minister's Secret Agent right now, counting down to December 7.
ReplyDeleteLove it! So, back to work for you!
Count me in as another person who's been watching "The Roosevelts" on PBS! What fantastic timing for MRS. ROOSEVELT'S CONFIDANTE, Susan.
ReplyDeleteAlso, can I say I am INSANELY jealous of your two retreats? Are they really solo, as in, just you? Because that's my fantasy. Not even staying with friends - because then I want to socialize! - but just holing up in a remote hotel somewhere. Preferably one without internet access...
Yes, two absolutely solo retreats.
ReplyDeleteBut since I now live with Hubby, Kiddo, Miss Edna, cats Lola and Xander and now adopted (at least for a while) 20-something kiddo in a "cozy" NYC apartment -- it's either do some retreats or not finish.....
This is a marvelous series. I'm sure all those loose ends will fall into place nicely.
ReplyDeleteGo Susan go! Wishing you the wind at your back as you hit the home stretch. Love this excerpt - can't wait to read more!!
ReplyDeleteOh yes, thank you for continuing the focus on the Roosevelts for another day.
ReplyDeleteGood luck with the solo writing retreats. Sounds heavenly.
Susan… great excerpt! Love it! Roosevelts. TV. PBS. Now I have this and more to look forward to!
ReplyDeleteHank! I'm getting a visual going of your Rubik's Cube— "… click, click, clic, and each bit snaps into place, until it's perfect." Up it goes on my Scrivener bulletin board.
xoxo
KBGT as well as the older Technivorm KBT each have coffeemakered a steady, widemouthed glass pitcher with an easy-to-seal cover.
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