LUCY BURDETTE: We love having our pal Barbara Ross visit the Reds because it means another book is coming soon! She has a giveaway too--that will be happening over at our Reds and Readers Facebook group. So after reading the post, pop over to the group to leave a comment and be entered in the drawing!
BARBARA ROSS: Hello, Jungle Red community! I am so happy to be back here. I’m especially pleased to be celebrating my most recent release, Easter Basket Murder, a novella collection, containing stories by Leslie Meier, Lee Hollis, and me. My contribution to the collection is the novella, “Hopped Along.”
I’m especially pleased because one of the Reds—Julia Spencer-Fleming—was instrumental in the story’s origin.
In the early fall of 2022, I was invited on a weekend writing retreat. The participants included Maine writers Brenda Buchanan, Julia, and our hostess, Robin Facer. The house where we met was spacious with several writing spaces with wonderful lake views. The plan was to work on individual projects during the day, and then meet in the evening for food, wine, and conversation. After dinner we would read from the day’s work, or talk through a knotty plot problem, or discuss, endlessly, the crazy publishing world in which we found ourselves. And as is always the case when crime writers get together, we would laugh and laugh.
One of the reasons I committed to the retreat—besides, you know, fun—was that I was sitting on a time bomb. I had a contract to write a novella. It was due in seven months. At any moment my editor at Kensington was going to ask for my synopsis.
I’d known of the theme, Easter Basket Murder, for over a year at that point. In all that time, I hadn’t come up with a single useable idea. My first thought was, “severed head in an Easter Basket.” I maintain you can do pretty much anything in a cozy if you write it right. In Boiled Over, the second book in my Maine Clambake Mystery series, a foot comes bouncing out of a clambake fire. No one has ever complained. But think as I might, I couldn’t figure a way to make the head in the Easter basket anything but gruesome. That I was getting nowhere told me I wasn’t inspired by the idea.
My novellas are always third in these collections. That means the obvious murder, in this case a murder caused by some item or substance in an Easter basket, will have been used by the time the reader gets to my story. So, I try to come at the theme a little sideways. Another consideration was that Kensington novellas are contracted for between 25,000 and 35,000 words. At that length, only one of my first five novellas was structured like a classic whodunnit. The others were much more like short stories with more of a whatisgoingonhere or whattheheckhappened sort of thrust, and then—twist!
So that is what I knew when I arrived at the retreat. Come at the theme sideways. Surprise the reader with a twist. But I had none of these things, especially not a twist.
When I sat down that first day to write, I found, as writers almost always do, that I knew more about my story than I thought I did. I knew the opening setting—the newly renovated mansion on the island where my protagonist Julia Snowden and her family run their authentic Maine clambakes. I knew the occasion—Easter lunch. And I knew the attendees—Julia’s family and friends, most of the regulars in my cast.
I had one bright image of the opening scene, which I often do when writing, especially when writing a short story. There was a man, an older man, dressed in a morning suit, lying in a vegetable patch, a top hat, and an Easter basket nearby. Julia’s six-year-old nephew finds him while hunting for eggs. He runs to tell the grownups that the Easter bunny is dead in the garden.
Now there was plenty to explore. Why was the man dead in the garden? Why was he dressed like that? I knew he was an old-fashioned butler, not a participant in a wedding for example. I only have one regular character wealthy enough to have ever had a butler, so now that character was in the mix. Complicating things, I discovered as I learned more about the man in the morning suit, I liked him. I wanted Julia to get to know him when he was alive. But how if he was dead in the vegetable garden in the very first scene? Flashbacks? No, because if Julia had met him before, she would recognize him and that would cause all kinds of complications.
It was in this hopeless muddle I reported in that evening. Everyone jumped into the spirit of the challenge, tossing out ideas. (It’s much easier and more fun to write someone else’s book than your own.) We kept going, and in the nature of brainstorming, a lot of the ideas weren’t ones I was going to use. But if you generate enough ideas…Eureka! There it was. My twist. And the solution to the mystery. And the solution to the problem of Julia meeting the man while he was alive. Or did she?
I don’t remember who came up with what. It was definitely a group effort. A very talented group. I am forever grateful.
Readers: Have you ever had a knotty problem someone with an outside perspective helped you solve? Tell us about it. To be entered in the drawing for a hardcover copy of Easter Basket Murder, leave a comment in the Reds and Readers Facebook group.
Barbara Ross is the author of the Maine Clambake Mysteries. Her books have been nominated for multiple Agatha Awards for Best Contemporary Novel and have won the Maine Literary Award for Crime Fiction. Barbara’s Maine Clambake novellas are included along with stories by Leslie Meier and Lee Hollis in six holiday anthologies from Kensington Publishing. Her twelfth Maine Clambake Mystery, Torn Asunder, will be published on April 23. Barbara and her husband live in Portland, Maine. Visit her website at www.maineclambakemysteries.com
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Easter Basket Murder Book Description
Put on your springtime best and grab a basket, because Easter egg hunting is to dye for in this delightful new collection of Easter-themed capers set in coastal Maine and featuring fan-favorite sleuths from the long-running, bestselling cozy mystery series by Leslie Meier, Lee Hollis, and Barbara Ross!
EASTER BASKET MURDER by LESLIE MEIER
Tinker’s Cove businesses are clashing over a new Easter Basket–themed promotion to boost in-store sales, with tensions boiling over the grand prize—a mysterious golden egg crafted by a reclusive Maine artist. When the one-of-a-kind art piece is stolen, it’s up to part-time reporter Lucy Stone to investigate three struggling entrepreneurs who stick out in the local scene. But a huge town scandal comes into focus when a harmless shopping spree turns deadly, leaving Lucy to stop a murderer from springing back into action . . .
DEATH BY EASTER EGG by LEE HOLLIS
As Bar Harbor’s annual egg hunt approaches, Island Food & Spirits columnist and restauranteur Hayley Powell is thrilled to introduce her grandson, Eli, to local springtime traditions. Turns out, keeping up with a rambunctious toddler isn’t always sunshine and rainbows—especially when a decadent peanut butter treat kills the Easter bunny himself during the festivities! Now, with a clear-as-cellophane case of murder on her hands, it’s up to Hayley to crack the clues and scramble deadly plans before it’s too late . . .
HOPPED ALONG by BARBARA ROSS
Julia Snowden’s Easter Sunday at Windsholme, a sprawling mansion tucked away on a remote Maine island, looks like it’s been borrowed from the pages of a lifestyle magazine. But when a dead body is discovered in the garden—then vanishes soon after without any explanation—an innocent hunt for eggs becomes a dangerous hunt for answers. With no clues beyond a copy of The Adventures of Peter Rabbit, Julia must find out if April Fool’s Day came early or if she’s caught in a killer’s twisted game . . .
“Easter Basket Murder” sounds delightfully intriguing, Barbara . . . and I’m looking forward to discovering how you solved the mystery!
ReplyDeleteOften, when I was teaching, a group of us would get together and, invariably, end up discussing classroom/student concerns and issues . . . and someone in the group usually came up with the solution.
There is nothing like the power of colleagues! I always felt that before I started working alone.
DeleteAlways fun to hear how ideas came to be. Glad you got some help for a fun novella.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Mark. And thanks for your review.
DeleteBARB: I am reading the Easter Basket Murder right now, but still at the first novella.
ReplyDeleteFun to learn that the third (your) novella in the set is supposed to be the obvious murder. I enjoy reading holiday-themed novellas and the Kensington series of novellas fits the bill.
Rick Copp , the brother in the brother-sister team who write the Lee Hollis mystery, says he always goes straight at the theme. If the title is Eggnog Murder, the victim dies drinking eggnog. Even though I don't see the other novellas before I get the ARC, I have confidence that angle will be covered, which is why I try to come at the murder sideways.
DeleteLoved reading about the process of how your novella came together. And of course I have to read it, now. It sounds really intriguing.
ReplyDeleteWhile writing my stories, I've often gotten good suggestions from my writing group that I might not have come up with alone, but I've never work-shopped a story with others the way you described. That sounds like so much fun.
I was in a writers group for 20 years and I love the process of commenting on works in progress. I have done that much more often than brainstorming up front.
DeleteWaving hi to my blogmate and friend Barb! That's a great group you went on retreat with - so glad the plot got fixed too. I've brainstormed plots with you and the other Wicked Authors over the years, and I went on retreat with Ramona DeFelice Long, Annette Dashofy, and another writer or two in the past - also fun and helpful.
ReplyDeleteI still need to pick up my preordered copy of the novella collection - it's waiting for me!
Edith, I too was thinking of our retreats with Ramona as I read this!
DeleteWaving back, Edith! I hope you enjoy Easter Basket Murder.
DeleteI love retreats. They're always inspiring. And I have a wonderful critique group who are fabulous at brainstorming solutions.
ReplyDeleteI love retreats, too. As Edith mentioned above, we go on a Wickeds retreat every year. I was in a critique group for 20 years and I don't think I'd be published without them.
DeleteYou crime authors have all the fun. Brainstorming ways to kill people! With good friends! Look forward to reading the collection, Barb, as always.
ReplyDeleteI did have that experience, in a completely different area. For years I wrestled with how to add on to our old house, but there was an old set of concrete steps leading to the basement--the only way in--that stymied me. One day I mentioned it to a friend with construction experience when he was visiting, and he said "Easy. Just turn the steps 90 degrees." I'd had no idea that could be done, but voila! It changed everything, and the addition I'd been designing for ages finally became reality. The old steps are still there, they are just now under the new sunporch, functioning as shelves.
Wow, Karen. What an ingenious way to repurpose old steps!
DeleteI love it!
DeleteAmanda, taking them out would have required Herculean effort, so might as well just use them. The rest of the addition has a crawlspace.
DeleteI love it when people are experts and they just casually know or fix something I can't figure out at all.
DeleteBarb, the same thing happened when I took my (amateur) plans to the architect. I couldn't figure out how to fit the new roofline below the existing second story windows. He took a pencil out, drew a couple lines, and said, "It's a classic roofline. Do you want to work for me?"
DeleteBarb, your brainstorming session with friends sounds like it was a blast. At NE Crimebake, I frequently observed the Reds gathered together for sessions, and I know that Reds and Readers was born during one of those meetings.
ReplyDeleteWhen I was active in a national women's organization, I frequently was included in sessions of that sort. I remember that special feeling of comraderie, when friends put their heads together for a purpose, to solve a puzzle or devise an approach to a difficult or thorny position.
There is something about having a common purpose that is absolutely wonderful. I loved that in my pre-writing corporate job.
DeleteThe team will always outperform the individual! I love this behind-the-scenes tale of a crime writer's process. Thank you, Barb!
ReplyDeleteSo absolutely true!
DeleteI love a good holiday themed mystery and don’t believe I’ve ever read an Easter one. A dead man in the garden is much better than a severed head in a basket!
ReplyDeleteI'd never seen an Easter one either. As you can tell, I was flummoxed by the Easter theme at first.
DeleteIn my working days, I noticed brainstorming with a group of librarians frequently involved long pauses with mostly introverts overwhelmed with (gasp people) and sneaky power plays done by the occasional power hungry-- not much fun. Then came the internet, and groups who problems solved.. Free wheeling commentaries also complete with trolls et all. Sounds like writer's retreats were and are a lot of fun. Once again talent wins out. I am looking forward to reading your latest novella, maybe next year the head in the basket could be chocolate?
ReplyDeleteA chocolate head! Why didn't I think of that? I once had a baby made of bread shipped through the mail in a short story.
DeleteCoralee, I found my group of librarian colleagues to be the best group I ever worked with at working together. And most of us were far from introverted. I am sorry you had that experience. (Chocolate head? Great idea!! :-) ) — Pat S
DeleteThat retreat was wonderful! Brainstorming about the corpse in the garden was so much fun, and just one of many wonderful conversations at the amazing Robin Facer's lovely lake house that weekend. I've now read the finished version of Hopped Along and applaud you for pulling off another winner.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brenda and thank you for all your help with the story.
DeleteWhy have I not come across these collections of holiday-themed novellas before? Three juicy stories, long enough to keep me entertained for more than a few minutes. Especially around Easter, when we are likely to be held in the last gasps of winter--no sun, freezing rain, etc. And I love the spirit of that retreat--it's so much fun when you can play off the ideas of others.
ReplyDeleteFlora, I completely agree!
DeleteSince all three stories are set in Maine, and mine on March 31, as Easter is this year, weather definitely plays a roll.
DeleteBarbara - enjoyed your intro this morning! So interesting. Thanks. And it's a good reminder to hit the library this morning to get a clambake mystery.
ReplyDeleteI hope you enjoy the book!
DeleteOh, cannot wait to read this! And I so agree--the moment when you think of IT is amazing. No matter who /actually/ thinks of it! And that picture is so vivid. Kinda magical, right?
ReplyDeleteMy cynical old brain usually take some persuading that IT is really IT, but then when I get it....
DeleteYes. You KNOW. xx
DeleteCan’t wait to read this!
ReplyDeleteI hope you enjoy it.
DeleteCongratulations on the new novella, Barb. It is definitely easier to write someone else's book. My critique group gets me out of knotty problems all the time.
ReplyDeleteHi Liz. It seems to be universal that whenever writers are together suggesting something for someone else's book is way more fun that untying a knotty problem in your own.
DeleteSometimes when I’m trying to figure out the solution to a problem I literally sleep on it and the answer comes through a dream. I don’t go to sleep with that intention but it occurs somehow.
ReplyDeleteThis has happened a number of times and has proved to be be a successful resolution for a situation I couldn’t figure out when I was awake.
That happens to me too. Your subconscious is really smart. Often when I make a change later in a book, I'm amazed at how much of the story is already there in the first part. My subconscious knew I was going to make that change all along!
DeleteI cannot wait to read this! Sounds wonderful
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kait! I hope you enjoy it.
DeleteBarb's wonderful twist absolutely owes just as much to Brenda and Robin and herself as it does to me.
ReplyDeleteOne of the most FUN activities between writers, I've found, is the chance to plot together. People who are fiction writers are natural idea-generators; we can't stop them anymore than singers can stop singing or musicians can stop playing. And it's SO delightful to start playing our ideas off one another - the only analogy I can come up with is if you're used to playing solo racketball, and suddenly get with other players who are just as skilled as you. Instead of hitting the wall, now you're swatting the ball back and forth and all around. Fun, right?
Many thanks to Robin Facer for being such a delightful and generous hostess for what turned out to be a very productive writing retreat.
Absolutely, thanks to Robin. And to you and Brenda.
DeleteI find if I just stew on the problem a while, let it simmer, the solution may suddenly pop up. Voila! I love when that happens. And it helps a lot when new information is added to the mix.
ReplyDeleteAs for an Easter basket murder, who knows? My uncle used to claim that he'd just shot the Easter bunny when we'd visit him in the wilds of central Texas. That rabbit needs to stay out of the garden!
Shot the Easter bunny! That is hilarious. And exactly the kind of jest my family would have appreciated.
Deletehttps://www.nytimes.com/2024/01/30/world/europe/japanese-monkey-escaped-scotland.html Lucy, a Quick Look back to yesterday…cows and scones and monkeys “Oh, My”. Elisabeth
ReplyDeleteI usually just try to keep my problem or concern in the back of my mind and usually when I don't expect it, a solution will pop into my head. Love reading anthologies, looking forward to reading the Easter anthology.
ReplyDeleteI hope you enjoy it, Dianne!
DeleteFirst, welcome Barb!! It is always such a treat to have you here!! Love the idea of the Easter anthology! And isn't brainstorming with other writers the most fun! I'll bet you guys had a blast. Why is always so much easier to fix other people's plot problems?!
ReplyDeleteI think I think you're freer and much less inhibited about someone's else's book. a) You don't have as many preconceived notions, and b) You know you don't have to do all the work!
DeleteHi, Barb! Always great to see you here! My plot group has become a key presence in my life. I can't get anything done without them! Can't wait to check out this fab collection. Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteI've worked with Jessica Ellicott a lot whose polka dot plotting method you featured on the blog last year. She has been a lifesaver for me!
DeleteBarbara, this Easter trilogy sounds like quite a treat. Having the man in the garden dressed in a morning suit intrigues me. Having him disappear makes it a must-read mystery. I envy your writing retreats, and this one sounds like such a great setting for one.
ReplyDeleteThis knotty writing problem wasn't helped by outside perspectives, and it was a fourth grade student's knotty problem. Well, it was actually my problem, too, because I was working on her with her writing portfolio, which had to contain five different pieces. It was a state mandated writing portfolio that was scored by a group of teachers and results were a state-wide big deal. Anyway, this particular student was my biggest challenge, as she had no ideas and didn't respond to prompting and didn't really have any interest in creating or writing. But, one day I was asking her some probing questions, and she actually opened her mouth and started telling me something that happened to her, or so I thought. So this was going to be her personal story piece. About halfway through her talking about it, she told me it was a dream she'd had. I groaned inside for a minute, and then untied that knot by declaring that we now had her fiction piece. So many interesting knots working with fourth grade writing.
It's a good thing you figured it out before the fire-breathing dragons or flying monkeys appeared in the story.
DeleteTruer words! "It’s much easier and more fun to write someone else’s book than your own" And Barbara, I also find it harder to write short than long. (I've written my way into a lot of plot-holes and found my way out by asking for ideas from the Reds.)
ReplyDeleteI love writing in the novella length. I always say my novels are too short and my short stories are too long (usually to meet the wordcount required by the publication), so novellas are just right.
DeleteDon't laugh, but the TV show "Maine Cabin Masters" is my favorite TV show right now. We have made many trips to Bath Iron Works for the launching of US naval ships, too with side trips to LL Bean for dry clothes. We love the food and the air and the woods and driving all around those crazy roads with my Porsche club as our annual rambles are based their often. So, I can't wait to read these novellas when they are available as shorter stories can be just enough to give me a refreshing jolt! My biggest knotty problem actually has not yet been resolved although I have brought it to many experts. When it rains, the water floods into the passenger compartment of my Porsche from somewhere under the hood. My mechanic of 37 years (My car is that old!) suggested that the battery tray was leaking. That worked a few times, but the last rainstorm I encountered caused a monsoon that could not be mitigated even with a rash of beach towels thrown at the disaster. This blog has reminded me to bring this issue to a different group of experts such as our regional club's Facebook page to attempt to brainstorm possible solutions.
ReplyDeleteI am a planner and brainstormer. I can usually come up with a wide variety of ideas on my own. I do enjoy planning and brainstorming with others. I have done so on planning committees for events with Girl Scouts, summer camps, and women's groups' events. The last time I can remember was planning for a library summer reading program. It was on sports which isn't one of my big interests. I planned out weekly programs highlighting a different sport each time. Since I did not live in the community, I really had no idea what resources were available. I sat down with others from the library to see what and who they knew and came up with some programs I never would have thought of. Once I talked to the people and found out about what they had to offer for a program, it was easy to build a fun program around them all.
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