LUCY BURDETTE: I’m deep into the first draft of Key West food critic mystery #15, as yet untitled and uncovered. You might remember that the book kicks off with the explosion of a boat off Mallory Square—the craft on which Hayley Snow and her mom and stepfather and many other Key West celebrities and characters are sailing. Of course you’ll see a lot more about that event, but a second plot line runs alongside: the celebration of Miss Gloria’s 85th birthday. I love writing about parties and food in this series, woven around the murder investigations. I think it gives the reader (and me) a little break from the tragic events and consequences. The hat that Miss Gloria is wearing is like one that I bought for myself for a big birthday. (No it was not 85!)
For once, my mother wasn’t having to cook all the food. She had insisted on preparing some hors d’oeuvres in advance—non-fussy dishes such as mounds of Key West pink shrimp, her famous cheese wafers, and a fancy Italian cheese, olives, and charcuterie board, so that Martha Hubbard could focus on the main course. Even with her cooking responsibilities minimalized, she’d been at the club house most of the afternoon to make sure the decorations were set up to her liking. The house looked even more stunning than usual, with glorious tropical flowers spilling out of their vases everywhere, amongst photos of Miss Gloria with her family and friends at all stages of life. Tables had been set up in the living room, dressed in white lace with pale pink napkins, good silver, and more flowers. Already the rooms felt alive with chattering guests, even though we’d had to make some hard decisions about the invitation list. Having lived on the island for over thirty years, my neighbor had befriended and was adored by a lot of people.
I found the guest of honor in the parlor, aka formerly the men’s smoking lounge. She looked adorable, positively radiant. We’d spent a lot of time last week trying out hair mousse and then combing her short white pixie so the little peaks stood up to her satisfaction. She pulled a fast one by showing me two different sweatsuits that she pretended to be choosing between, each of them baggy in the knees and elbows, though studded with her favorite rhinestones. In the end, she wore navy silk balloon pants, a white lace top, and a sparkling birthday crown with Birthday Princess written in sequins that I’d ordered for her on Etsy. It had roses and pink tulle scattered all over and glittery gold trim on the points of the crown. Wearing it, Miss Gloria reminded me of all the good fairies I’d imagined in my childhood. I hurried over to squeeze her into a hug and kiss her.
“You little dickens,” I whispered. “All this time I worried you were wearing a saggy, faded old sweatsuit to your own party.”
“A gal has to have some secrets, even from you,” she said, her eyes sparkling with laughter. “It was fun to tease you and watch you be all careful and considerate of my awful taste.”
“You’re not only a dickens, you’re a little devil,” I said laughing and pulling her into another hug.
Question for readers: Do you enjoy nonstop, pulse-pounding action, or prefer to take a break sometimes with humor and fun?
Meanwhile, you can pre-order Lucy Burdette’s Kitchen (July 23) and A POISONOUS PALATE (August 6.)
This is so sweet, Lucy . . . I love how Miss Gloria fits into the story and an eighty-fifth birthday is special indeed. Can't wait to read the rest of this book!
ReplyDeleteI must admit that I do like all that pulse-pounding action, but I don't need it to be nonstop . . . and I love the humor and fun as well, so I guess I'd vote for a balance between the two.
Thanks, Joan! Yes, a mixture of the two sounds best to me as well. And it depends of course on what I’m writing. There weren’t too many scenes like this in unsafe Haven!
DeleteThis is true . . . but I loved "Unsafe Haven" . . . .
DeleteWhen I'm reading a cozy, I enjoy the doses of light and fun. Of course, I don't want them to take too much away from the plot, however. There's a fine line.
ReplyDeleteIf I'm reading a thriller, I want fewer of those scenes, although I still enjoy seeing the characters have time to develop.
Yes, of course we want those characters to develop, just maybe not in the details of a birthday party LOl
DeleteAwww, this scene is adorably sweet! I love Miss Gloria's sass and spunk and am glad you are going to show us her 85th birthday celebration in your next book!!
ReplyDeleteMy grandparents did not show much joy or spunk. Life in WWII & post-WWII Japan was hard so they displayed a stoicism & formality the few times I met them. Three of them passed away in 1980, none made it into their 80s.
LUCY/ROBERTA: As for your question, it really depends on the type of book I am reading.
If it's a thriller, then yes I want non-stop pulse-pounding action that keeps me frantically turning the page to see what happens next.
But in your Key West mysteries (and other cozies), it's the characters and community that I want to visit and enjoy reading. Tasty food scenes and milestone celebrations are welcome.
I’m sorry about your grandparents Grace. You’ve made me remember that my paternal grandmother was not much like Miss Gloria either! I like the fictional better!
DeleteIt's ok. Not all grandkids can have idyllic loving relationships with grandparents.
DeleteBut I wish that I could have met my maternal grandmother. She was always laughing in the few photos I saw with my mom. And I was told that she loved looking at maps of faraway places, having never left Japan. But she died from TB at the age of 39, so I never got the chance to meet her IRL.
Grace, I feel a bit like that about my paternal grandmother whose name my parents gave me as one of mine. She was one of three sisters who were strong women and who always had a special place in my father’s life. She died three years before I was born.
DeleteFun scene! I love your description of the setting, the food and Miss Gloria's choice of clothes for the event. I can picture Hayley restraining herself from commenting on the sparkly sweats, since Miss Gloria has a preference for those outfits. Surprise. I expect, no, I look forward to scenes like these in cozies.
ReplyDeleteUsually, even in the most pulse-pounding thrillers, you get to see the humanity of the characters. If you don't care about the characters, how can you remain engaged in their story?
I agree with Mark about these scenes giving the characters a chance to develop.
Precisely Judy! If I don’t care I won’t read
DeleteI wonder how late into the party Miss Gloria lasts in the fancy clothes, loose as they may be, before she is back in her sweats? I'm afraid I would be encouraging people out the door....
DeleteI love this scene, Lucy. And of course it's appropriate in a cozy mystery. Each scene has to move the mystery ahead at least a little bit but I love a party thrown in. And your birthday hat is great fun too!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Edith! I always try to remember the saying that a scene must either move the Story forward or reveal character or even better both.
DeleteI don’t classify your Key West mysteries as cozy. Your writing is excellent and nothing like the books most cozies have become. I think the series should be marketed as a traditional mystery. Cozy has a very negative connotation to broader reading audience.
DeleteI like the Miss Gloria character, .but sometimes it feels like she takes over the story too much.
I love this scene that I read with a wide smile. I love action scenes as long as it move the story forward.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Dru!
DeleteI love a touch of humor sprinkled in with the serious stuff. I don't see it as either/or. I'm thinking of the movie, Die Hard. No one could argue it was fast paced, but it was hysterically funny at the same time.
ReplyDeleteLucy, I love this scene!
Totally agree, Annette, it does not have to be one way or the other. I did not use the part today where more conflict is shown. That will come soon!
DeleteI love a good mix of heart-stopping action, and the personalities of the people. I think that is what makes loyal readers come back to favourite authors – we feel right at home. My new favourite Julia Chapman has mastered it.
ReplyDeleteI love the crown – how my granddaughter would love that (she is 7). I love the menu for this party – sounds delicious, tasteful and easy. Personally, I need to learn and accept, that good food done simply is a great thing – and so much easier on the host.
Now, gardening people need to know, just what would be considered ‘glorious tropical flowers’ for a party in Key West. I suspect it is not a small bouquet of snapdragons and baby’s breath?
L O L on the snapdragons and babies breath, more like birds of paradise are what I had in mind
DeleteMiss Gloria is irrepressible! She and my mom would be great friends, I think.
ReplyDeleteHeart-pounding, page-turning reading used to be my favorite. But in the last few years I have completely lost my taste for it. Enough drama in the real world. I'm afraid. It's been great to have milder mysteries for this part of my reading life.
Yes, I know exactly what you’re saying Karen. It started with the pandemic for me… Although I am reading a Swedish crime fiction called blaze me a sun. It is certainly not cozy, but I think the characters are done well enough that I don’t mind the hard stuff as much.
DeleteI think a balance of the two is best and this scene you have presented is just perfect! But I had no idea what balloon pants were; is this a new trend? I had to look them up since I haven't seen them anywhere. So maybe Miss Gloria is, dare I say it - an Influencer?
ReplyDeleteOh, she would adore knowing that you think she is an influencer😂😂
DeleteI confess it depends on my mood. I love this excerpt just for example. So sweet.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the snippet! I'm reading my way through your series and just finished number 4, so I still have some catching up to do. I love the mix of action and humor in your books, along with the food! So delicious. I'm so glad Miss Gloria is still going strong.
ReplyDeleteSo glad to hear you are reading! Nothing will happen to Miss Gloria on my watch😂
DeleteGillian, good stories ahead! In my humble opinion, the best is yet to come!
DeleteDitto to what Mark said.
ReplyDeleteLove reading everyone's comments, and am looking forward to the new book!
ReplyDeleteAnswering the question: yes, the humor (and relationships) sprinkled throughout are what keep me coming back to this world.
Thanks for that!
DeleteI love that the Hayley Snow series isn't formulaic in any way. Because it is about Hayley's life in Key West and she is socially engaged with her ever expanding friends and family, her everyday life would naturally include family events (weddings, birthdays, baby showers, etc). I can't wait for #14.
ReplyDeleteI think thrillers would be the one genre that I would expect to move forward with just the main story to create tension. One of the best thrillers I've read over the years was the A Girl With the Golden Tattoo series. Although I do remember there were rare softer moments.
Thanks for the comments! I admit that I did not dare read girl with the Dragon tattoo. I still have it on our shelf in the den in case I decide I can do it.
DeleteLucy, while it’s well written, you need to know that GWDT takes at least 80 pages to get going. I thought it was worth it in the end, but my friends had to encourage me to make it to stick with it to about page 80. — Pat S
DeleteLucy, I encourage you to read The Girl with the Dragon Tatoo. It is as twisty a plot as you have ever seen, and in spite of the violence, the characters are extraordinary!
Delete^ Err, The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy taking time out to see characters not stressed, afraid and in danger. I love reading about food and clothing but these scenes should come at the right place. There are times we don’t want to lower the tension. I always love your celebration scenes, Lucy!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Rhys!❤️
DeleteLucy, the lighter scenes follow naturally from Haley's life in Key West. If you stuck in something extraneous just to break the tension, that would definitely pull me out of the story.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate that and totally agree. The lighter moments have to be part of the story not pull us right out of it.
DeleteFrom Diana: I really enjoy taking a break to read about characters not stressed nor afraid in cozy mysteries. I love reading about food, cute clothes and witty banter, Lucy. So nice to relax.
ReplyDeleteMiss Gloria is always a delight. I think of the actress Gloria Stuart from the movie Titanic.
I don’t remember that character. I am going to have to go back and look for her ex
DeleteThis is a touching scene (and I love the photo with you in your birthday crown!) I was thinking about thrilling books that also make me grin, and Adrian McKinty's Sean Duffy novels are a superb example. The books mix dangerous action scenes that take your breath away with moments of dark, clever humor. Mick Herron's Slough House series, too. Lots of action books have no humor, and that's all right, but when the mix is done well, it's terrific.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kim! I have not read either of those series so will have to put them on my list
DeleteYou know I am such a fan! And yes, it’s all about the pacing. You have found your voice, and your style, and I would recognize a Lucy Burdette book anywhere. Xxxxx
ReplyDeleteThanks, dear Hank!
ReplyDeleteHappy Birthday, Miss Gloria. I like the humor (shocking, I know) and the glimpses into the character's personal life. That's when I get attached.
ReplyDeleteI think you need a balance. Too much pulse-pounding action leaves the reader (me) exhausted. But I don't want the breaks to go on too longer, either.
ReplyDeleteA break for humor and fun makes the characters more real to me. And I love to laugh!
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Oh, I love humor and fun! (And Lucy, I want you to plan my next birthday party - you write like Martha Stewart is sitting at your elbow!)
ReplyDeleteWhether it’s a cozy with sweet scenes like this one with Hayley and Miss Gloria or an action packed thriller, we want to know about the characters. We want to care about them so we’ll be invested and keep reading. And humor is always welcome! — Pat S
ReplyDeleteWho doesn't love Miss Gloria? And, of course, I love the relationship between Hayley and Miss Gloria. Her 85th birthday celebration is so much to look forward to for readers. And, I like a break with some humor and character interaction between the action that's fast and furious. Also, you look lovely in your birthday hat, Lucy.
ReplyDeleteI love some humor to break up the tension! Who doesn't want to grin or laugh?
ReplyDeleteI love the crown, and Miss Gloria, and comic relief. After all, it was good enough for Shakespeare. ;-)
ReplyDelete-- Storyteller Mary
I love the domestic bits--that's how you get attached to characters, I think. Also, it really annoys when characters don't eat in novels! Love Miss Gloria's birthday and your crown, Lucy!
ReplyDeleteHumor and fun for sure are needed by all of us these days! I have stopped watching the evening news, found new favorites on PBS, the history channel, and Magnolia! Even while away on vacation this week when our tour guide’s stimulating sharing became too much, I pulled out my book and read myself into oblivion! Alicia Kullas
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