Wednesday, August 14, 2024

Rhys on Writing a Virtual Escape

 RHYS BOWEN:  I've just sent off my next historical stand-alone to my editor. The one that's called MRS. ENDICOTT'S EXCELLENT ADVENTURE.  I have to confess that I have enjoyed writing this more than any other book as it was a virtual escape and fantasy life for me.

The heroine, a middle-aged English woman, is dumped by her husband of thirty years. Instead of accepting her fate and retiring to a cottage she steals his Bentley and drives to the south of France, taking with her two other women who have reasons to want to escape. Once there she finds a villa that has long been abandoned. On a ridiculous impulse she decides she wants to restore it and live there.

So this is my fantasy life. A villa overlooking the Mediterranean. That's what I want. And the interesting thing is that there are abandoned villas to be found in Europe. When we stayed on Lake Maggiore in Italy we passed several long-abandoned villas and I said to John then "Who owns them? Why doesn't someone buy them and restore them?"  In my case the owner abandoned the villa long before she died and it is now owned by some remote next of kin with no interest in it. I presume this is what happened to those villas I've seen.  I think I'm a little too old and chicken to buy one and restore it the way Mrs. Endicott did, but it was fun to write about.

Here is the passage where she first sees the villa:

In the middle of the wall was a tall iron gate. Mr. Danton took a key from his pocket and inserted it into the lock. There was a click and the tall iron gate opened with a protesting squeak.

                “Please proceed with great care,” he said, standing to one side and assisting each of them up a final steep step into a garden. Ellie entered but then stood transfixed as she looked around her. It felt as if she was in the book, The Secret Garden, or rather in the magic realm of Sleeping Beauty, fallen asleep for a hundred years. In front of them had once been a lawn but was now a dying mass of dried grass and weeds. The ubiquitous bougainvillea tumbled over the walls, in a riot of reds and oranges. At the far end of the lawn was an orchard of fruit trees, a pomegranate still bravely producing its brilliant red fruit after so many years of neglect, what might have been a persimmon and several citrus.

                Ellie turned to the other direction and saw the villa itself. Before it was a gravel forecourt in which stood a stone fountain, now long dry. And behind this was the Villa Gloriosa. Now no longer glorious.  Ellie had expected a ruin but found she was looking at a perfect villa with a red tiled roof. The house was painted pink with pale blue shutters. It took Ellie a moment to notice that the paint now peeling and some of the shutters hanging at crazy angles. Tiles had fallen from the roof. There had been some sort of veranda or trellised arbor along the entire back of the house but this was completely overrun by what looked like wisteria, although the leaves were now dying and lying in a yellow carpet.  Another vine with dark red and brown leaves—grapes this time?—climbed up the far side of the veranda and competed with the wisteria in a mad tangle.

                “This way.” Mr. Danton interrupted her reverie. He began to walk toward the house. The path was lined with an avenue of palm trees, now casting a neat row of shadows across the gravel. Ellie followed him around the side of the villa to an impressive pair of oak double doors carved with a pattern of vines. Mr. Danton produced another key and was about to lead them inside when Ellie looked past him, to her left, and gasped.

                “Wait” She broke into a run.

                “Careful, Madame. Watch your step,” he called but she didn’t care if the flagstones were cracked and uneven. She ran past the house and came out to a terrace overlooking the sea. It was edged by an ornamental stone balustrade topped with carved pineapples, some of which were now missing, but Ellie didn’t notice this. She crossed the terrace and stood with the whole panorama unfolding before her. Directly below her St. Benet lay nestled in its little hollow, the village mainly in shadow, the cliffs on the far side glowing in the sun. Beyond were more promontories, more cliffs, fading into blue distance. On the horizon was a chain of rocky islands. As she watched a boat with a red sail glided out from the harbor into a Mediterranean that went from shades of pure turquoise to deep, rich blue.

                “Oh,” she said out loud, “This is heaven.”


You can tell that I was creating my fantasy perfect villa. I browsed quite. few online and found some that came close, like this one:



But then I decided that would be too big to manage these days so I'd settle for something simpler, like this:

What do you think? Which one do you like better? I think you're going to root for Mrs. Endicott and her pals to succeed through a lot of difficulties and I hope that, like me, you enjoy spending some time living virtually in the villa. The book comes out next August, I believe.

47 comments:

  1. Oh, my . . . I can hardly wait to see what Ellie does with the villa! [And how she succeeds in spite of being dumped by her husband.] I think she'd pass on the very big one, but one a bit smaller certainly seems possible . . . .

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  2. It all sounds delightful, Rhys. Is it crime fiction or more a tale of women finding themselves?

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    1. Also, let us know when you're ready to receive visitors! I like the smaller waterfront villa better.

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    2. It’s more a story of women bonding, growing and succeeding against odds although there is a mystery as well

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  3. I think it depends on how many of us you're planning to put up, Rhys! The first could fit a lot of Reds...I'd be first in line. Can't wait for this book!

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    1. Wouldn’t that be fun! I’m going there next month. If I find a villa in need of TLC who knows?

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  4. What a great description of an enchanted spot. Sleeping Beauty indeed! I know that I want to get into that Bentley with Ellie and her friends and share their adventure. Tell us a little more about this story.

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    1. Exactly my sentiment Judy. Not only do I wish them to succeed but I want to be part of their adventure
      Danielle

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    2. I think I want it to be a surprise who she takes with her. I’ll just say they are an unlikely group and not all of them are who they seem!

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  5. That's a nice fantasy life! I would pick the second villa. The pool and view look great.

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  6. Now I want to go with Ellie to see what else is on that property!

    Go with the bigger house! It's the South of France, and everyone you know will want to visit!

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  7. I need a bit of greenery in my life so, I would go for a mix of the two: a smaller villa in a garden. But
    I would keep the view.
    I can’t wait to read all this story.
    Danielle

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    1. The view would be the selling point for me!

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  8. This sounds like SO much fun! I can hardly believe we will have to wait a year for it. But I can console myself with The Rose Arbor which just arrived in the mail. :-)

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  9. Just what I needed this morning!! What a wonderful fantasy! As Lucy said, you're going to need the bigger villa as we are all coming for longish visits! Personally, I'm with Danielle--I'd prefer a smaller version of the first one. Green space + Mediterranean view = heaven!

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  10. Hank Phillippi RyanAugust 14, 2024 at 8:04 AM

    This is so brilliant! You have such an authentic and recognizable voice—I just love it! And hey, either place is lovely.

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  11. Ooh, I would love either one! I can't wait to read this book. (Selden)

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  12. I can’t wait to read this!! As far as which villa to choose, if funds can stretch to having staff then #1; if no staff #2 looks more manageable.

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    1. Definitely staff! We’d sit on the terrace and I’d ask the butler to bring us drinks!

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    2. Can't wait to read it. #2 is great. I too stayed at Lake Maggiore for 3 days of paradise. My parents had a picture of the lake and dad called it Lake Mag e ore. He didn't know Italian.

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  13. Why are my fantasies practical? Does Mrs. Endicott have enough funds to deal with wiring? with finding a staff to help maintain the property? Is everyone in good health, and can they walk to the local town? What about that cliff edge? How secure is it geologically? or maybe just maybe allow story unfold. Knowing Rhys told me it was excellent and trusting it will be just so. p.s. I vote for the house with a library and fireplace.

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    1. Nothing will be either easy or practical but they forge ahead anyway

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  14. Do I get a staff to clean it? That's a key feature. Since I'm a big fan of single-floor living these days, I'm not sure a villa is for me. Or do they come in one-story varieties?

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    1. I don’t think it would qualify as a villa if it was one story. I’m not sure what the exact definition is But someone to clean would be nice.

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  15. RHYS: :The novel Mrs. Endicott's Excellent Adventures sounds brilliant! Reading this morning, I was reminded of a movie that I loved - Enchanted April with Josie Lawrence, Joan Plowright, Miranda Richardson, Polly Walker, Michael Kitchen, Jim Broadbent and Alfred Molina.

    Which villa would I chose? Both villas look wonderful. I love the look of that swimming pool. Both villas, if they were for sale in the States, would cost millions of dollars. A friend and his husband bought an apartment in Portugal. Another friend and his wife bought a rustic farmhouse in France.

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    1. One of my favorite movies, Diana. I own the DVD. You can buy cottages or farmhouses in France for not much more than 100,000 Euros! Not fancy ones near the sea, however

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    2. Charlene Miller-WilsonAugust 16, 2024 at 1:24 PM

      Diana: Rhys' description reminded me of Enchanted April too. And I join you both in it being one of my favorite movies! So looking forward to reading about Mrs. Endicott, Rhys. I would prefer the first villa (I like trees and shade) but would enjoy either one.

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  16. From Celia: I’m ready for fantasy this morning though like Coralee I’m inclined toward the practical. Thank you Rhys, just loving your writing, so polished, each word fitting just like a jigsaw. But to the question. I love the first villa, it reminds me of Gerald Durrell’s pink villa in My Family and Other Animals. Whether South of France or a Greek island I think the vibe is the same. But I would like a swimming pool.

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    1. Those Corfu villas were a fantasy of mine years ago. We stent a summer in Corfu at a house Lawrence Durrell had owned!

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  17. Sounds like a grand adventure! I think I like the simpler villa better.

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  18. I could probably make either one work especially if I had friends with me. Did you ever watch Sunday Morning on CBS with Charles Osgood? On one of his very last shows he reported and was interviewed from his home in France. It was on the terrace of his villa overlooking the Mediterranean .What a retirement home!
    Atlanta

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    1. Yes, that was utterly exquisite and I wished that it were mine!

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  19. I can get behind this fantasy. Sounds loving. I'll take the second one, please.

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  20. And now I want to restore a villa on the Mediterranean. Thanks, Rhys. LOL. Seriously, though, I can't wait for this book. Under the Tuscan Sun meets Miss Benson's Beetle (but there's no beetle). Fabulous!!!

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  21. Oh yes! I thought of Enchanted April, Under the Tuscan Sun, and Mary Stewart's This Rough Magic for the description of the garden. I want to be part of Ellie's posse!

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  22. Enchanted garden, house-fixer-upper, villa by the sea--with a mystery!! What an absolute blast, Rhys!! I would take either villa, by the way:-)

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    1. From Celia: Debs you could send Duncan and Gemma plus kids on vacation to an old villa on the south of France. I think you will write the story better than I!

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  23. This is magical!! Reminds me of the wonderful moment in A Secret Garden when she goes through the gate and into the garden.

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  24. Wow to you already having next year's stand-alone written and to the story that goes with it and to the villas. I think I'd choose the second villa because of the gorgeous swimming pool, and I'm imagining a little more house to the right that we can't see which would accommodate guests.

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  25. We always wanted a Victorian house and finally got one after retiring from the Air Force. It was in bad shape and needed to be gutted down to the studs. I love the house. It isn't a fancy one, just a farm house, but has the gingerbreading and wraparound porch. It was a lot of work getting it in shape, now 32 years later, it is time to repaint and fix things up again. I love the large vila above, but would take the smaller one with the pool.

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  26. I love the second one. Just perfect. The first one has no cozy appeal. Eager for the book!!!

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  27. I'd enjoy the villa with the pool as it reminds me of my new favorite TV show "Hotel Portofino" which is filmed in beautiful Croatia while pretending to be based in Italy!

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