DEBORAH CROMBIE: I am happy to report that I am at last making some progress on Kincaid/James #20, as I am creeping up on 50,000 words, which should be at least half a book (I tend to write long--otherwise I would say MORE than half a book.)
Partly, this is because, after my back surgery in the summer, I am finally able to sit at my desk for a decent amount of time as long as I remember to take breaks at least every half hour. I never thought I would be so thankful for sitting, something I took so for granted! (A little aside here--why did no one, not the surgeon, not PT, suggest that I try a gel pad? It just occurred to me one day, so I looked online, and yes you can get just a simple gel chair pad for about $30! This has made so much difference, I can't tell you!)
And partly my progress is due to our Hank and Roberta helping me stay focused and accountable for what I accomplish every day. (See our recent post on focus here.)
But I am, however, suffering from a case of seasonal disfunction! I know this must happen to most writers, even if they write books set where they live, unless, or course, they write entire novels in two to three months (which some among us do!) and they write them in the appropriate season!
My book takes place in London in mid-April, and I am constantly reminding myself to put in seasonal cues! But which ones? What exactly is blooming in London in mid-April? What plants will you find in the garden center (a scene I am working on now!) This is one of the reasons I keep past issues of magazines like the UK edition of Country Living--so helpful. And, fortunately, spring in the south of England is not that different from spring in north Texas. Although London is much farther north, the lovely jet stream keeps it temperate--in fact, we are more prone to really hard freezes here in north Texas. (The recent snow in London was quite bizarre for this time of year!)
So while the leaves are falling in my back garden, I'm imagining fruit trees in bloom (are the ornamental cherries finished? Is it too early for wisteria?) and the trees cloaked in verdant spring green.
While I don't have anything particularly spring-y to share, I thought you might enjoy meeting a character I really like. She's not quite a new character, as some of you may remember her as the uniformed constable Kincaid encounters in Soho Square in A KILLING OF INNOCENTS. She has now been promoted to detective constable and is part of Gemma's team in Gemma's new posting.
Before
leaving for Warwick Avenue, Emily Hawkins had taken a moment to freshen up in
the ladies’ toilet at the station. Hair pulled back into a neat knot at the
nape of her neck, but still ginger, unfortunately. Makeup, minimal. With her
milk-pale complexion, she looked like a clown if she wore more than a dab.
What was
appropriate dress for an acting family liaison officer? That hadn’t been
covered in the training course. As if deciding what was appropriate attire for
a newly promoted detective constable hadn’t been challenging enough. In plain
clothes for the first time with her promotion to CID, she hadn’t wanted to go
full-on trouser suits, afraid she’d look like she was aping the senior ranking
female officers like DI James—and she’d known her mates still in uniform would
be the first to take the piss. But neither was she doing the telly detective
look. It seemed like all the women in the cop shows wore jeans, t-shirts, and
leather jackets. Maybe you could get away with that if you were undercover, but
she’d just look a prat, and would lose any bit of authority in the bargain.
Today, at
least, she was glad of her choices—chocolate trousers, smart oatmeal-colored
blazer, a pale blue silk t-shirt. Presentable but not too starchy, or so she
hoped.
Now, having found a spot to park
the pool car she’d driven from the station, she climbed out, gave her jacket
one last tug, and walked back towards the address she’d passed, trying not to
feel intimidated by the posh terraced houses. Money would do nothing to
alleviate grief, she reminded herself as she descended to the basement flat.
Fellow REDS, do you struggle with writing out of season? And readers, how much do you notice the seasonal cues in books?
Thanks for this, Debs . . . it's nice to meet up with Emily again.
ReplyDeleteI do notice seasonal cues, but I must admit that I don't always know which plants should be blooming when . . . .
That makes two of us, Joan, lol!
DeleteWhat is a gel pad?
ReplyDeleteThere are lots of different kinds, some made of memory foam, and others made of different kinds of squishy gel. Meant to cushion the sit bones, while also sometimes offering a cooling sensation. Depending on the type, they can help you sit with your spine properly aligned, too.
Deletethank you!
DeleteThanks, Karen! Yes, Anon, this one is almost exactly the size of the seat on my Aeron chair, about an inch thick, and filled with some sort of squishy gel/foam. The covers came in all sorts of colors but I chose black because my chair is black.
DeleteDebs, I wish I had known about this when I was still working! I had spinal fusion surgery in 2003, which partially failed, and then I had to have it redone in 2005. It became terribly hard to sit. For the rest of my working years, I had to get up about every fifteen minutes because of pain. I set a reminder on my computer to tell me to get up and move around. Fortunately, my job did provide me with plenty of occasions to get up. I could probably use one at home for my dining room chair.
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Yikes, Deb. What a trial it is. I may eventually be facing much more major surgery than the discectomy I had. Ugh.
DeleteI love the scene, Debs. And good idea to keep those magazines around as research tools.
ReplyDeleteYes, I bump into the wrong season all the time, although I wrote the Halloween season book I just turned in, for once, Halloween season! But the book I'll start writing in January takes place in June in northern California. Go figure.
You'll enjoy imagining yourself into lovely California weather. Although in northern CA, I imagine it might still be pretty brisk.
DeleteHappy to hear you've found some relief, Debs, and I am glad to know about the gel pad. How did you hear about them?
ReplyDeleteGood scene. I love how you introduce new characters and gently create their stories. Emily is so human in her concerns about what to wear and how her old friends will tease her, how her new team will regard her.
As far as the season, I am very tuned into the seasons and the weather in the books I read. It certainly impacts each story. It is especially significant in series, because of how much time has passed since the last book. It will be good to get to know Emily better in this book.
Oh, thank you, Judy. I just thought one day, "There must be some sort of pad." I was sitting on pillows in desperation, which I don't recommend. So I looked online and the first thing up was exactly what I wanted.
DeleteI'm very aware of making it clear how much time has passed between books.
Great to see Emily again! Flowering trees, leaves emerging, naturalized daffodil clumps (Holland Park?), too early for beds of tulips. What about the gorgeous gardens at Kensington Palace? Pansies or violas planted in the window boxes? Is the air soft with the promise of spring rain or brisk and windy? And what color is the water in the Thames?
ReplyDeleteI'm deep in edits in my "bleak midwinter" book, taking precise notes about the cold, black ice, and hooting owls.
I keep finding myself wanting to write another "bleak midwinter" book.The season is SO atmospheric. But I doubt we'll skip that far ahead in the book after this one...
DeleteThank goodness you found the gel pad, Debs. Doctors don't always think of stuff like that, sadly, but some modern ideas make a big difference. The Salonpas pain patches that have helped my foot more than anything else I've found, and easily found at a decent price, are a perfect example. They smell of Ben-Gay, but the relief is amazing.
ReplyDeleteWay back before the dawn of time, when I was a dress and accessories buyer for a chain of shops for small and petite sized women's clothing, we were always planning three to six months ahead. I'd be buying winter and holiday lines in July, then swimwear and sundresses in January or February. It could be very jarring.
Looking forward to catching up with the London crew. If this is #20 I am at least one or two behind.
Oh, do catch up, Karen!! At least you'll have some time to do it before this one is published!:-)
DeleteI am so looking forward to this latest book! Yes, I do notice things like descriptions of the seasons. I especially notice when things like fruits and vegetables are harvested and I compare to when those things take place in my part of the world. Sometimes unfortunately authors get things like that wildly wrong! Not our Reds though.
ReplyDeleteI do worry about all these little details! According to Google, the dates for the average last freeze in London are between the 11th and the 21 of March, so I think it safe for Karo to be planting her tomatoes in her sheltered patio.
DeleteThere’s always a daredevil who plants tomatoes early😊
DeleteLove that you are so precise ... I totally notice!
DeleteAlso cannot wait ... can you hear us all drumming our fingers on the table waiting for 20
Love it Debs! I'm so glad you're back in your seat:)
ReplyDeleteThanks, dear Lucy!
DeleteLove this scene, Debs!
ReplyDeleteAh, yes. Writing winter scenes while it's 95 degrees outside. Writing summer scenes in January when everything is monotone and bitterly cold. I try to keep notes of birdsongs, smells, trilling insects, or the clack of bare tree branches in the wind to use as needed.
And I love mentally putting myself in a summer setting when I'm actually bundled in sweaters and have the heater blasting.
It's cold here today so I'm looking forward to writing another nice April day in the next couple of scenes--although I don't guarantee the weather will hold!
DeleteRhodos – lots of rhodos. They were just past the best of bloom when we were there in May, and grew as weeds along the sides of the roads.
ReplyDeleteForests of bluebells – you can hear them tinkling in the breeze.
Of course, acres of daffodils, with their little faces shining up to the sun!
As winter comes upon us, it is so lovely to think of spring!
Oh, yes, the rhododendrons! I think they would just be coming in to full bloom in mid-April, and azaleas. Thanks for the reminder. I think the daffs will be finishing but the tulips will gorgeous, and everywhere!
DeleteGlad to know you found something to relieve you Debs.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the snippet. I’m looking forward to learn more about Emily’s role in this new book and about the place she will take in the world of Gemma, Duncan and company.
Living in a place where the temperature varies a lot through the year, I like a good description but don’t care too much about details
Danielle
Thank you, Danielle.
Delete“Not too starchy.” I love that! Debs, you should do a whole post on how you get yourself in a British language frame of mind when you write. That is quite a triumph.
ReplyDeleteAs for the seasons, absolutely! I often have to write in the office at season. And I remember, so hilariously, when I was writing. THE WRONG GIRL— it was sweltering August, and the book took place in Boston in February. So I put a little yellow stickie on my computer which simply said: ITS COLD.
I need to put a sticky on mine that says SPRING! The post on "British language state of mind" would be a short one. A switch just seems to flip in my head.
DeleteWhat? A switch? That is the most intriguing thing I have ever heard. Amazing. Love to hear about it!
DeleteOne of the things that my husband loves about Debs books is what he calls her "British-isms." I agree that I hear British accents when I read Debs' books!
DeleteI don't even think about it, really, when I'm writing. I am, however, fascinated by different British accents. It's one reason I'm so addicted to shows like Great British Bake Off, as the contestants come from all over England and sometimes Scotland, and it gives you real life-not TV actors examples of the ways people speak. One contestant, I don't remember which series, was from Lancashire and had the most dreadful accent. (Sorry, any readers from Lancashire! Maybe not everyone sounds like that!)
DeleteI love descriptions of rain, fog rolling in, dark and stormy nights (!). If the book takes place in a location that I'm not aware of the specific weather patterns, I wouldn't know if the writer describing the seasonal weather was slightly off or not accurate.
ReplyDeleteI love that so much is learned about the new character, Emily Hawkins, in such a brief encounter with her! Not just her looks, but how she feels about her job, her team mates, her boss. So brilliant.
One of the fun things about writing a book set in April in London is that the weather is so changeable. It's not likely to snow, but I can have pretty much everything else! So glad you enjoyed Emily. She will remember Duncan well from the crime scene she worked with him in Innocents, but she doesn't yet know that Gemma has a connection to him, so that will be fun to write.
DeleteOooh! She doesn't know Gemma's connection to Duncan :) I love London and all it's quirky weather. I especially love the rural areas outside London for their unpredictable weather.
DeleteWe traveled throughout the south of England one August on mopeds and it rained (like sheets of rain) every other day. We bought more rain gear than we would ever use again in San Diego where literally a single a drop of rain sends everyone running for cover.
I skipped walking the dog yesterday because it was raining and thought what a wimp I would be by British standards! They walk their dogs rain or shine! In my defense, however, Jasmine doesn't like the rain, either...
DeleteIf the British didn’t walk their dogs,who would find the bodies??
DeletePortlanders (Oregon) are completely oblivious when it is raining. I don't mean a sprinkle but a deluge. While visiting our grandkids' school one year it was pouring rain and the kids continued to run around on the playground soaking wet. The teachers were standing out in the rain chatting with each other. My husband & I were in such a panic we raced for cover and wondered why no one was declaring this a MAJOR weather event and bringing kids to SAFETY and ushering them inside their classroom. The teacher said the real weather problems are when in June it becomes bright and sunny. The kids squint and shade their eyes and act like moles coming out of hiding. I don't think they even bother to sell umbrellas in Portland!!
DeleteToo funny!!!!
DeleteThanks for this scene, Deborah! "Wearing brown pants, a beige blazer, and a blue shirt, Emily...." Which would tell us what Emily was wearing, but wouldn't give us any information about Emily's state of mind and personality. This is what you do so well--build your characters and make us care about them! And yes, details of the season add immensely to a book, as far as I'm concerned. As real people, we constantly adjust ourselves to the season, so it makes sense that characters would do the same.
ReplyDeleteThe English are famous for talking about the weather, so it makes total sense that my characters would be preoccupied with it! And thank you, Flora, for the compliment. ! I love Emily finding her way in this job. She was fearless in uniform, but now she has to learn the ropes all over again.
DeleteI'm glad your back is healing and you are able to sit again. I love the snippet--took me right back to the UK. I spent an April in Leeds and another in Edinburgh--pretty cold and wet for the most part! I do remember seeing the naturalized daffodils blooming in York and thinking, "Oh yeah, it's spring here!" With climate change upon us, seasons aren't so reliable any more; I wouldn't worry about being too exact.
ReplyDeleteApril in Edinburgh is definitely not a "romantic spring" place to be! Still cold and wet but at least the days are getting longer!
DeleteGlad you found something to help your back, Debs.
ReplyDeleteI'm constantly out of season with writing. I think the book I'm working on is set in July, when it's hot and muggy, and there is currently an inch of snow outside and it's 20 degrees. Maybe if I crank the fireplace...
Oh, that's hard, Liz! You have really got the extremes. Maybe use Hank's trick and put a sticky on your computer that says HOT AND MUGGY.
DeleteExcept for November and December, when I reread/read December themed books, no attention to seasons at all. Although, Deborah, I remember Duncan’s “sweaty” or freezing rides in that old car of his…may it “rust in peace”. Elisabeth
ReplyDeleteThe Midget is rusting happily in Duncan's parents' garage in Nantwich. Maybe Hugh will get around to fixing it up one of these days.
DeleteDebs, do British kids want cars the way American kids do? I wonder if Kit might end up someday driving a refurbished Midget.
DeleteSo nice to be reminded that Midget is, at least, sheltered from the storms. Elisabeth
DeleteKaren, simple answer is no. You can't get a license until 18. The test is VERY hard to pass--I know adults who have failed multiple times. I also know lots of adults who don't drive. Getting a license and a car is not a rite of passage like it is here. And, of course, public transport is so much better there that in most places you can manage just fine without one, the exception being really rural areas.
DeleteAnd no one wants to drive in London!!!!
It's expensive, too, I know, with a monthly fee just to drive in London. I was thinking Kit might go to cooking school somewhere outside the City.
DeleteI notice the details of clothes and seasons -- what the characters are wearing must fit the season of the plot. I enjoyed this snippet, Debs, and I look forward to meeting Emily Hawkins more fully in your book #20! We have snow on the ground here in Manitoba, so an English spring is lovely to thing about...
ReplyDeleteWe had our first real norther last night, with a hard frost this morning, so I'm finding it nice to think about spring, too. Although I think there is going to be some "weather" upcoming in the book.
DeleteI'm glad Emily has joined Gemma's team. Looking forward to the new book and spring in London.
ReplyDeleteEmily was one of those characters who jumped off the page and said, "Hi, I want to be in your book!" I love it when that happens.
DeleteDEBS: So glad that the gel chair pad is helping. Love that scene with Emily Hawkins.
ReplyDeleteNow that you mention seasonal cues, as a reader, I am going to look for seasonal cues as I am reading the book. Just a thought. If an author is struggling to write about the season at a different time of the year, then perhaps the writer can refer back to a daily calendar where they jot down notes about the weather or a daily diary? I have been writing notes in my calendar like "sick today" or "started HRT" or "very cold weather" or "heat wave". Yesterday there was a tsumani warning! There was an earthquake that I slept right through!
That's a great idea, Diana! And I saw about the earthquake! Glad there didn't seem to be any damage!
DeleteOkay, here's thing--Easter. In 2025, it falls on April 20th. In 2026, it's early, on April 5th. If I use the 2026 calendar, Easter will be over and done with and no one will think about it. If I use the 2025 calendar, the action in this book is taking place Easter week, and the holiday will definitely be a concern. And I sort of like this for all kinds of plot reasons... Hmmm.
ReplyDeleteI'm looking forward to book 20. I love the series and all the details you put in. I can see the places you put in.
ReplyDeleteWhich pillow did you get? Was it the Cylen? Thanks. I may need one for the car too. Great blog.
ReplyDeleteJoan, here's the link: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B097DZB3QF
DeleteI should actually bother to write a review. This has made such a difference for me. I have folded it into a tote bag and taken it to restuarants where I knew the chairs were going to terrible, too, and I even use it on our sofa in the evenings.
I should definitely get one of these to take with me to the library! Our library recently replaced all the reference room chairs with what I can only describe as “torture”chairs. I’ve been taking a large pillow with me, and it’s helpful, but somewhat bulky. Thanks to you, Debs, I think Amazon is going to see a huge increase in sales for these gel pads!
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Deb, this is just what you need, and will fold into something like library tote bag. When I was going out to a much anticipated dinner, I looked up photos of the restaurant's chairs ahead of time--flat wooden seats. I stuck my cushion in a tote bag and took it with me and it absolutely saved my life. No way I could have sat through a couple of hours dinner without it!
DeleteCould you possibly give the brand name? Thanks
DeleteOh Deb, I paid no attention to the season but did wonder if those chocolate trousers would melt!
ReplyDeleteHa, Ann, so glad you all have pointed out to me that have "chocolate" and "oatmeal." One will have to go and I suspect it will be "chocolate!"
DeleteI love the stress about what to wear. I often think if I had the chance to travel back in time, I would be too scared to make a big change for fear of the consequences, so I would travel back to events when I hated what I was wearing.
ReplyDeleteFor work I went to an international meeting in Tokyo. Since attendees were from all over the world, with different ideas of “business casual” then sent a graphic with 3 different examples illustrated. Very helpful, particularly since I was a trouser suiter at work and struggled with anything more casual.
And were you hungry when you wrote this? Chocolate trousers, oatmeal blazer?
Oh, too funny! I must have been! Maybe the trousers will have to be something besides "chocolate" :-)
DeleteS**t brindle may be what they would be called around here!
DeleteThe ubiquitous wardrobe dilemma, dressy but not-too, able to stand up to mishaps, while making the right "statement." When I was subbing my way into a permanent teaching position, I used to lay out two or three choices to be ready for the morning's call: elementary school, regular jr. high & high classes, shop, P.E. ;-). -- Storyteller Mary
ReplyDeleteEspecially with a new job! I'll bet we've all been in Emily's situation!
DeleteI was fortunate to wear scrubs to work. Once less thing to think about!
DeleteI usually skip over descriptions of clothing, but I found myself actually seeing in my head what Emily is wearing! I can imagine what the weather is like at that moment, and how I might dress for it. Great job of pulling all that together!
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I like writing clothing as a clue to character/personality, and once I've done that don't tend to spend much time on it. Or so I say--if I went back through my books I might find that that is wrong!
DeleteAs a fellow back pain sufferer, I'm delighted you've found something that helps. Especially since I want you to be able to give us the next D&G! I tend to notice seasonal cues primarily near the beginning of a story, or the beginning of a new section where the scene has shifted. Once I've got the season set in my mind, I don't continually process such cues, except when it strikes me that the budding flowers might be a signal to someone, or the growing bush might be a place to hide something.
ReplyDeleteI noticed the well-flavored outfit too, and wondered if that was clever characterization of Emily. I like that she's a bit worried about her friends teasing her rather than just whether she will look all right.
No, I was completely blind to the double food adjectives, which just goes to show why we all need copy editors!
DeleteGel pad?! My sciatica is taking notes! I actively try to write the season I'm in so I feel this post in my soul. But, Debs, you're brilliant so I know you've got this!
ReplyDeletehttps://www.amazon.com/dp/B097DZB3QF Here's the link, Jenn!
DeleteThanks for the link! (Heather S)
DeleteYou're recovering, even if slowly, so that's a good thing, Debs. But you must have great patience to be able to take it a step at a time without going bonkers when you post! As to out of season descriptions of the natural world, that's getting harder to do, alas. Margaret Renkl, such a quietly brilliant author, writes with sadness about the climate changes all around us and their effect on us and wildlife, in THE COMFORT OF CROWS. New "norms" may give you more artistic latitude these days!
ReplyDeleteYes, I read Margaret Renkl, too, and bought The Comfort of Crows to be a companion to my reading chair--which I can no long sit in as it hurts my back!
DeleteI always pay attention to what season it is in a book. I like to know the weather, what the trees are doing, what flowers are blooming, and so forth. I wonder, do men ever stress about what to wear?
ReplyDeleteI think they do, Pat. I know my son-in-law does, for dressier things, although he always looks great!
DeleteLoved the snippet of your book, and keenly await it in published form!
ReplyDeleteIt's ALWAYS easier to write about *when* and *where* you are at that moment. Details you can't make up are literally within reach - all you have to do is pay attention. Sometimes all "research" involves is going there with a camera and a tape recorder and a notebook. Debs, your books are so terrific because they *really* *really* *really* feel like the when and where of your scenes and you made that happen by going there.
ReplyDeleteLove the excerpt and look forward to more of Emily.
ReplyDeleteTo me the biggest seasonal change was the daylight, or lack there of. 🙄. This southern girl was not used to dark at 4:30p.m. or light (and birds singing) at 5 a.m.
A plant/ flower question. Are you familiar with “wallflowers?” They were planted around the foundations of the house we let in Surrey. Maybe there are better known by another name.
I wasn't, but Google says they are called Erysimum. So pretty!
DeleteGreat teaser and happy to know Emily is part of the team! “Innocents” was so well done.
ReplyDeleteI hadn’t thought about the seasonal dysfunction issue (not a writer- so far) it surely makes sense.
Not for back pain (arthritis in hips however) I have an inflatable waffle cushion that is soooo nice especially when driving long distances. The gel pad sounds great.
Take care. (Heather S)
Author Julia Kelly might be a resource for you on what is blooming and when etc in London. She lives there and she and her father are both quite the gardeners. She had a series of instagrams posts on gardens a couple of years back.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Brenda! I like her books, too!
DeleteI do notice seasonal clues but don’t drill down too much for accuracy (unless it’s glaringly wrong!). We were in the Cotswolds in March 2019 when we drove through a surprise snowfall! It was over very quickly but so fun and unexpected!
ReplyDeleteSo excited for #20 and may need to go back and reread your last few again as a refresher!
Tomorrow should be a perfect day to stay indoors and write (cold and rainy in McKinney) from your Frisco neighbor.
I’m glad you got some relief for your back! Sorry it didn’t happen sooner. Interestingly, I have been known to suffer from Reader’s Seasonal Disorder, as when I read Water Like a Stone in the summer and was cold the whole time! Brrr!
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