Thursday, December 5, 2024

What We’re Writing: Lucy is Scrambling!




LUCY BURDETTE: This time of year, with the two holidays tumbling one after the other and the high season launching in Key West, it’s hard to stay focused. In spite of that, I finished the edits for Key West food critic mystery number 15. It’s up for preorder, and I think it's now called The Mango Murders, though it's still minus cover art. It feels a little naked without a cover, but let me assure you that the words are all there and the rest of it will come.

If you followed the blog post a couple of weeks ago in which Julia begged for tips to keep focused, you might remember that several of us threatened to start a mini group designed to keep our our goals for the next books on track. I always find this helpful. I managed to type out 4300 words the first week, reinventing my thumb and forearm tendinitis in the process. But I’ve got a good start on a new book and have spent some time this past week figuring out what could be happening after a strong opening. (Hopefully you will find it strong!) This isn’t the very very beginning, because I don’t want to give you a spoiler. Deputy Darcy Rogers, who’s been Hayley’s nemesis in the past, arrives at their home with a proposal. Nathan’s gone to fetch her a beer, leaving the two women talking.



“My grandma always said the present moment was a precious gift that often went unappreciated. That present moment is the only moment where we are.”

“Wow,” I said, bringing my rocker to a standstill. “She was deep.”

Darcy Rogers laughed. “She was. I didn’t get my personality from her side of the family.”

Nathan returned and handed her a Stella Artois beer. They chatted for a few minutes about the fentanyl bust that had almost brought Fantasy Fest to a standstill. I watched, wondering what in the world she was really after. She had never, not once, dropped in on us for a friendly chat.

“I’ll get to what I came for, because I can see Hayley is wondering.” She winked at me. “You probably read about Florida's new law, called the Safe Exchange of Minor Children?” 

Nathan nodded. I shook my head no.

  “It’s also called the "Cassie Carli Law", after Cassie Carli, a Florida mother who went missing after a custody exchange. The law requires all Sheriff’s departments to arrange a neutral place with video recording available where parents can safely exchange their children,” she explained to me. “You can’t imagine the horror stories we’ve heard about uncooperative parents fighting like demons. This cuts down on a lot of potential problems.”

My husband’s face was beginning to morph from curious to slightly stony. “This concerns us because?”

Darcy drained the last of her beer and settled it on the table between us. “We’re looking for a civilian who might accompany a young woman on a child custody exchange, and I thought of Hayley.”


LUCY AGAIN: I’ve also been working on the beginning of another project which I’m not going to tell you about for fear of jinxing myself. But I’m confirming what I thought about myself which is it’s hard to work on two things at the same time. I am going to figure this out! 


How about you Reds, do the holidays derail you or are you able to enjoy them as ‘the precious moment where we are’?

ps three of the Key West ebooks are on sale for $1.99 through December!

A CLUE IN THE CRUMBS

A DISH TO DIE FOR

LUCY BURDETTE'S KITCHEN






77 comments:

  1. Oh, this is so intriguing, Lucy . . . can't wait to find out the bigger story! Thanks for sharing it . . . .

    ReplyDelete
  2. Wow, Lucy! There is a lot of potential in this opening for Hayley to get involved in one big mess. Yikes! I can hardly wait to see where you take her!
    I'll pre-order The Mango Murders for RJ Julia, and pick it up at the book birthday party. I wish I could attend more of the Reds' events! Just imagine flying to The Poisoned Pen, Murder by the Book! More. Sigh.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I wish I could go those places too!! I think I have to change the book launch because it seems they changed the pub date:). That's what I get for planning too far ahead...

      Delete
  3. "From" RJ Julia...

    ReplyDelete
  4. Now I'm imagining what might happen at the exchange! Looking forward to Mango Murders, although I wish I didn't have to wait until August.

    I'm doing small bits of holiday prep every day, trying not to let it overwhelm.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. that's a good approach Edith. We are just back from CA so it will take me a while to work back into the flow!

      Delete
    2. Oh, Edith, as a retired attorney/guardian ad litem I don’t have to imagine what might happen at such an exchange. Elisabeth

      Delete
    3. Lucy, looking forward to how you navigate Haley through this difficult challenge. I both dread and can’t wait to read this. Retired children’s attorney and GAL, these exchanges are fraught. But if anyone can write well about this, you can. Elisabeth

      Delete
    4. Elisabeth, I might need you to consult! I wonder if I have your email? Could you shoot me a message raisleib at gmail dot com? xo

      Delete
    5. Lucy, here ever so late. Having a procedure on my eye tomorrow, but will be in touch by email the next day. Elisabeth

      Delete
  5. Love this snippet and I did not know that Darcy Rogers and Hayley had a difficult friendship, unless I misunderstood?

    Doing bits of holiday prep every day sounds like a good idea to me.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yes Darcy was not fond of Hayley's meddling in A Poisonous Palate!

      Delete
    2. I don't recall Darcy Rogers in a lot of the books prior to A Poisonous Palate. But I do recall she was a little testy with Haley in that book. I don't think she worked for the KWPD though. Wasn't she with the Big Pine PD?
      I'm looking forward to No. 15. and to all the familiar characters especially Miss Gloria, and Lorenzo.

      Delete
  6. This is an intriguing story slice! Looking forward to the whole cake! (Selden)

    ReplyDelete
  7. This topic is interest to me since I am often involved in transporting my grandchildren. I know you will do it justice, Lucy, and I can't wait to read it.

    ReplyDelete
  8. From Celia: well my attention was captured and caught. I am wondering if any States have this child custody exchange law or is it your brilliant idea Roberta? And mangos are my favorite fruit. 🍌

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Celia, this is a new law in Florida. When I saw the snippet in the local paper, I was certain I could use it!

      Delete
  9. LUCY: Interesting snippet. Hayley and the young woman could get into plenty of trouble. Looking forward to learning more!

    And I also want to read about mangoes in THE MANGO MURDERS!

    ReplyDelete
  10. That excerpt is great, Lucy, and I have to say the holidays in Key West look very appealing. I missed the original post about staying focused, but it's exactly what I need right now!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. It's really hard to stay focused with so much else going on!!

      Delete
  11. Love the snippet. Requiring safe exchanges is a great idea! I don't feel at all derailed by the holidays--I probably shouldn't confess to being a bit ahead of schedule on some stuff, while still being behind on everything else.

    ReplyDelete
  12. If only we didn't need to have such a law. Looking forward to this story, Lucy! And thanks for the links. I think there is at least one of your Key West titles I'm missing.

    I've been doing a little shopping every day--mostly online, and trying to be mindful of not spending too much this year. My grandson is moving down to Cincinnati in a couple weeks--finally back within Grandma hug distance! So I'm looking forward to more time together doing things than just giving presents.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. You're so lucky Karen! We sure wish ours were closer.

      Delete
    2. My kids are all so far away! His mom is 500 miles, and she's the closest. The other two live in Portland, Oregon, about 2500 miles, and the youngest is in Athens, Greece. It will be nice to finally, after almost 20 years, have someone nearby.

      Delete
  13. Lucy, what a hook! Wow.

    I consider myself so-so on staying on track during the holidays. It's too tempting to curl up in front of the fire with a book and a cup of tea. Next thing I know, the day is gone. It's one reason I was determined to get the galley's of my new series debut out as soon as possible and why I want to have SILENT WITNESS out to my independent editor/beta reader before Christmas.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. The fire and book sound amazing, and I like your goals too!

      Delete
    2. Liz, have I missed something? New Series??

      Delete
    3. Anonymous above = Flora

      Delete
    4. Flora, maybe? I will launch the first book in a new series next year. It's a contemporary police-procedural set in Niagara Falls, NY and the protagonist is a homicide detective with PTSD. I have a release date and the cover, but I'm not allowed to share yet. LOL Soon, I hope!

      Delete
  14. I love the beginning of the new book! It hooked me right away.

    ReplyDelete
  15. I am right this moment trying to do too many things at once and not focusing at all well, including reading this blog. I’m sure the mango book will be another hit, Lucy and thanks for the sale alert!

    ReplyDelete
  16. I, too, loved the snippet! And I am with Liz — trying to stay on track while visions of sugar plums, er, books keep distracting me. I have faith in you, Lucy (if not in myself….!). — Pat S

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Also, thanks for the heads up about your books being on sale! Grabbed all three - Merry Christmas to me! — Pat S

      Delete
  17. Hello Friends. I want to apologize for my long silence, which will continue for another week until I am back to Bern and my computer, where I can type answers instead of using one finger on my phone. We're having a great time in Ecuador. Our Argentine godson's wedding to his Ecuadorian fiancee was so joyous, and we were fascinated by her tiny home town in the jungle. Lucy, sorry not to comment in detail on your except, which I found intriguing.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Your trip sounds amazing, Kim. Have a great time and catch up when you return. Looking forward to hearing all about it...maybe on the front of the blog.

      Delete
    2. I’d like to hear more about this, too!

      DebRo

      Delete
    3. Yes we'll look forward to hearing more about this Kim!

      Delete
  18. What a great opening, Lucy! And so interesting to see how a book begins, both on the page and in your mind...

    ReplyDelete
  19. I keep thinking about the civilian woman accompanying a mother to a dangerous child exchange, and hoping there's some self-defense training, perhaps like the training British nannies go through to protect their little ones. I can hardly wait to read this! -- Storyteller Mary

    ReplyDelete
  20. Lucy, I am curious about the title Mango Murders. Can you explain?
    So looking forward to reading this. Calling today to pre-order from my local bookseller.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. The publisher team didn't like my preferred title, so went with an alternate. It will be fine!

      Delete
  21. From Flora: Woohoo! Mango Murders to read now and a new book in the pipeline--music to my ears!!

    ReplyDelete
  22. The holidays usually derail me, Lucy, but they're a bit quieter this year. Virginia is spending late December-early January traveling through Europe, and Spencer and his new sweetheart are staying put in Norfolk. So it may just be four on Christmas Day, which is super easy to plan for!

    We'll have a whole-family get together when Virginia comes home for the second half of January; we may put off presents until then (and take advantage of the after-Christmas sales!)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Julia, I have learned to embrace the quieter holidays! It took a few years for me to truly adjust and enjoy.
      Heather S.

      Delete
    2. Sounds good Julia, and hope your Thanksgiving travel went well!

      Delete
  23. I’m really excited about reading the new book, Lucy/Roberta! Quite a few years ago, my pastor asked if I would volunteer for about a month to “chaperone” a Saturday morning visit in our parish meeting room of a father and two young children.The parents were divorced. From what I can remember, the father threatened to take the children, and also often didn’t show up to pick them up for a weekend visit. I think it was an agreement between the two attorneys that if he attempted to leave with the kids, or if he didn’t show up, he would no longer be allowed to see them. The meeting place had to be “neutral” ground, and that’s why the church meeting room was picked. I had to sit by the doorway to make sure he didn’t try to leave. Truthfully, I was terrified! The last Saturday of this plan, he didn’t show up, didn’t call, etc. I felt so sorry for the kids. I could see how this kind of arrangement could end in tragedy, and I’m eager to read your new book.

    DebRo

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. OMG DebRo, that definitely sounds scary. I am getting some very good new ideas from you all!

      Delete
    2. DebRo, thank you for being courageous and strong for these children. Supervising visits with parents is never easy. And never feels quite safe …physically or psychologically. Elisabeth

      Delete
  24. Can't wait to read it! Stoney faced Nathan and all!

    ReplyDelete
  25. Oh, yikes, Lucy, what a fraught situation, with all sorts of possibilities for trouble. That is brilliant, and I can't wait to read more!

    And I am usually completely derailed by the holidays, even though I don't do a fraction of what many people do. But I am trying hard not to be this year!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. thanks Debs. Let's not get overwhelmed because we need to keep writing our words!

      Delete
  26. After reading the snippet, I am completely hooked and can hardly wait to read the rest. Know it will be a fun ride. As for Christmas, I've accepted the fact that there is something that will not get done. No matter how early I start or how organized I try to be, it always happens. Something slips through the cracks. Now I just roll with what gets done and try to enjoy the moments as they come!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Marcia! Enjoying the holiday process is the very best approach.

      Delete
  27. Oh goody, reading your snippet, I am ready to read! Thinking Nathan’s response might be a wee bit STRONG. Time will tell.
    (Heather S)

    ReplyDelete
  28. I love that little preview and I can't wait to see where it goes. Plus, Mango Murders, too! As far as Christmas, I don't give it a lot of my time. I decided years ago that obligatory seasonal gifts bothered me. After my ex's grandparents returned a gift from us, that was the last straw. Granted they weren't nice folks to begin with, but clearly the season meant nothing to them. So, instead I began sending gifts to folks when I saw something that I knew they would love. Not because it was Christmas, but because it reminded me of them. I found those were much more appreciated than the forced ones. -- Victoria

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. thanks Victoria, and thanks for the good idea about gift-giving too. It has gotten crazy!

      Delete
  29. I liked this snippet so much. It does hook me. Although, I've never heard of this custody exchange. Is this a new law?

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yes it is a new law. I saw notice of it in our local paper a couple of months ago.

      Delete
  30. LOVE this snippet! And the emergence of THEMES! (and what a good set up for Haley, stepping right into someone else's conflicts...) My holiday preps include admiring other peoples decorations, let's leave it at that... :-)

    ReplyDelete
  31. Sorry, I am so late. I am living in the revision dungeon. Waaaaahhhhh! But your snippet was a delightful reprieve. Can't wait to hear all about it what's in the works!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Good luck in the revision dungeon Jenn! We'll be so glad to see what comes out.

      Delete