Sunday, December 22, 2024

What You DON'T See



HANK PHILLIPPI RYAN: What you do see, every Tuesday at 4 PM on CRIME TIME on A Mighty Blaze on Facebook, is my face, and an author's face, and you get to hear an interview with someone who just wrote a terrific new book. You get to ask questions, and spin the wheel of fun, and someone always wins a book.

And it all looks very seamless and fun. 

But what you don’t see is the brains of the operation.

Behind the scenes is a brilliant genius of a woman named Margaret Pinard. She and I have worked together for what – – five years almost now? She is the producer of CRIME TIME, and honestly Reds and Readers, without her the whole thing would fall apart. More than fall apart..be nonexistent. And I am astonishingly grateful to her every moment of every day.


But here’s the other part of Margaret. She is a brilliant, brilliant author! Her brand new book is called Orla Rafferty Seeks Her Fortune, which is about the best title I’ve ever heard. And you can find more about it  on Instagram @Margaret Pinard.

And like so many of us here at Jungle Red, she adores her research. And can come up with all kinds of reasons to do it! See if you agree – – and I will award a copy of Orla Rafferty, to one lucky commenter!


A Research Trip Is as Good as a Rest


By Margaret Pinard

Who here loves a novel that drops you into another place and time?

Yes, yes—you need story, character, pacing, and all that, but I love escaping into the tactile feel of Somewhere Else, be it fantasy, mystery, historical, or what-have-you.

So I suppose it’s no surprise that if readers enjoy this… writers might too! And this is how I, a writer in a slump and at a standstill with a draft, turned to a research trip to find my bearings.

These bearings appear to be permanently installed in Scotland. Having written six books with Scottish locations and/or people, my heart knows what it wants. And I needed to make my latest soul-refresher of a trip as useful to the draft as possible, which meant assessing, planning, and capturing.

I’m sure you all know how to plan a trip. But let me show you what I did to assess, plan, and capture, in case you ever need to use my excuse.

ASSESS


Where are we in the drafting or editing process? What do we need?

In my case, I had a sort of franken-draft. Started out with one idea, grafted another onto it, plotted a trilogy! But then I needed to reconcile all the backstories and motivations, which meant a lot of revisions. (I do not recommend this method; it landed me in the previously mentioned slump.)

So I was looking for supporting cast members and sensory details that would help ground the reader and reveal the main character. I had surfed through history books and bibliographies to narrow down the location and set my sights on ‘The Three Touns’ of Saltcoats, Ardrossan, and Stevenston (all in Ayrshire) for my founding myth of Irish rebels fleeing imprisonment.


The biographical sketches I’d read for people (men) of interest pointed me to Ayrshire, and I thought a small, seaside town would provide a good contrast to the industrial bustle of Glasgow (note: we’re talking about the 1830s!). Then I went to Google Maps to look for local museums and their hours (and possible closures).

Bingo!

A converted church in Saltcoats was open Monday through Wednesday and the last Saturday of the month—well, now I had my dates! (I opted for off-season for better airfare—February in the Lowlands!)

Since I had a few key letters in my story, I wanted to see some representative samples of those, or at least some on which I could model mine for authenticity’s sake. For that, I would need to seek out the Glasgow City Archives collections, in the Mitchell Library, which were available by appointment, Tuesday through Thursday and the first Saturday of the month.

Well, I could just make both of those schedules work!

Here were the two strongest leads to help me balance out my story. Now I just needed to plan the itinerary to make them possible.

PLAN

I sent the first email to the archives on October 25th, 2023. This is when I started requesting the airfare alerts, also. I had to find the right contact, confirm procedures, narrow down the materials I wanted to view for the short time I would have (six items only!), provide consent forms, etc.

(And yes! This was my idea of a relaxing good time!)

There was no one to contact at the North Ayrshire Museum, so that was left up to fate, which you’ll see wanted to have a laugh at my expense later. I arranged the plane, train, and room (because why would the airline fly me to Glasgow when it could just dump me in London?), and crossed my fingers.

CAPTURE

Then came the magical part.

It was ‘stotting down’ in London when I arrived, and the complete drenching I got on the walk to the hotel had to be remedied by a browse at the iconic Waterstone’s across the way. Suddenly, the woolens were not quite so sodden…

It was the darndest thing. Late February, I got on the dreary London train and zoomed north to Glasgow, and the skies cleared. The sun (sun! In February!) stayed out in Ayrshire for the entire four days I was there.

OK, OK, enough about the miraculous mental health bath, I hear you saying—how did I capture my details?


First to the countryside with its converted church. This part of Ayrshire has a lot of commemorated history, and so the exhibits that they’d arranged were not all relevant to my story’s class (middle), trade (newspapers), or era (1830s). But there was still a vibe.


The wooden marquis, polished to a dark shine, displaying names in gold of each year’s Best Boy and Girl of the local school: pride. The silver tea urn presented as a prize for a bowling tournament: wealth. The set of three dishes given to a servant when the Earl of Eglinton’s castle was to be abandoned: a complicated web of emotional connections between classes. 

With this museum, I was getting the material culture experience: what was important enough to save over the centuries?

I also perused the museum’s specialized library and chatted with the knowledgeable curators. 

And here’s the fate-laughing-at-me part. 

When I arrived, I was exactly on time for opening. But I walked the perimeter twice, stepping among gravestones, and couldn’t find an entrance. So I walked away, checked the website on my phone again, and returned, perhaps ten minutes after the hour. I was staring at the likely front door, wondering what I would do if it didn’t open—when it did! And I just about gave the poor woman a heart attack when she saw me standing 10 feet away.

She ushered me into the foyer, and as I took off my obligatory pack and coat quietly, the other woman in the library area turned around and I nearly scared her to death too! Apparently they aren’t used to folks being both eager and quiet? At any rate, they were great fun to chat with about local history and gave me several very helpful local walking tour maps.

At the City Archives, I again arrived right on time, but this time there were other researchers queueing with me outside in the cold. No heart attacks. I was ahead of my appointment time, so I browsed among the city collections and fell headlong into several histories of Glasgow’s banking sector—a fascinating evolution—or perhaps that’s my Shiny Object Syndrome speaking. Saving for later.


I did find representative samples of letters and records, though some of the records I saw were not those I’d requested. They were short-staffed, and trying to be accommodating, so I just rolled with it. What could I capture from:

An 1830s ‘letter book’?

An 1826 letter from a ward to his guardian?

An 1850 letter about a woman starting a lending library?

A letter from a group of men supporting the local laird in an election?

And this is when the magic of research obliterated my slump. When I arrived back home, I shuffled all my notes together, sat down, and actually made progress.

I had new names, new positions that made that society work, a desultory tone of voice for a woman, a tone to use when speaking to a superior and trying to stay in his good graces. These sent me swimming back into the whitewater of my political awakening story, with many personalities to choose from.

Margaret, 1; Slump, 0.

What’s the most powerful place you’ve visited for research, or incorporated into a story?


HANK: Slump, zero! LOVE this!

What do you think, Redsa and readers? Tell us one pivotal place–and a copy of ORLA RAFFERTY SEEKS HER FORTUNE to one very lucky commenter!





Margaret Pinard is a free-wheeling soul from the 19th century who finds it easiest to disguise herself by drinking tea, writing historical fiction, and popping off to the British Isles 'for research.' She has published seven novels and one collection of short stories. Her latest historical fiction work dives into 1830s Glasgow to highlight one woman’s political awakening to an age of revolutions--the first of a planned trilogy. Margaret hosts an active Youtube channel and blogs on the Patreon platform.



68 comments:

  1. Wow, Margaret, I am impressed by your research process . . . now I can't wait to read the book!

    I don't know about powerful, but the best place I've ever visited [on the pretext of researching for a class I was to teach] was the National Air and Space Museum [one of my most favorite places to simply spend time --- lots of time --- just wandering around and taking it all in] . . . .

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    1. I was there last spring, Joan, and loved the exhibit about the Wright SISTER - fascinating.

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    2. Those huge museums have so much to take in, they give me permanent crick-in-the-neck syndrome for tipping my head back to look at it all! I loved living in DC and taking advantages for many short trips to the Smithsonians. 💜

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    3. Edith . . . I discover something new and fascinating every time I visit . . . .

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  2. Your trip was perfect for banishing the slump, and I love the unexpected bits, too.

    I used my own New England town as the setting for seven (Agatha Award winning) historical mysteries and a short story collection. Amesbury has a rich nineteenth-century industrial history and a couple of good historical museums, including John Greenleaf Whittier's home. I love soaking up the past on my daily walks about town - no plane ticket needed!

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    1. And I predict YOUR home will soon be on the author tour! ( but you don’t have to invite anyone for tea :-))

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    2. That is so impressive, Edith! I love 19th century industrial history--looks like I may need to take a peek at your series!

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  3. I love this how-to essay focused on your research needs, Margaret. I'm now off to find your books.

    I often draw on my year living in Grenoble, France as a 17-year-old, earning her keep as an au pair (nanny). That was a formative time for me and is rich with life learnings...

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    1. That would be a terrific book!

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    2. I would have loved that method...if I could handle kids! Instead I picked teaching English to take me to Turkey ;) But Grenoble, how wonderful!

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  4. What fun Margaret! I think historical research would be a lot harder than writing in the present day...

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    1. Oh I SO agree! Xx

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    2. Yes, but the added enchantment of escaping the present is my motivation, lol!

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  5. Congratulations on your new book Margaret ! I’m glad you could come out of slump.

    I love everything Scottish . I’m a reader but I also plan my travels carefully and I love museums.
    My first travel in Europe was in Scotland where I visited Edinburgh, Inverness and Glasgow. All the stories I had read taking place in Scotland led me to go check for myself if what I learned and felt would stay. It did and it was marvellous.

    I appreciate the research done by authors and to know how it was done. Thank you.
    I downloaded Orla Rafferty Seeks her Fortune
    Danielle

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    1. Oh how wonderful! I know you will love it! Xxx

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    2. That was my first Scottish itinerary too!! Inverness was my favorite 🤗

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  6. Such a cool story. Scotland is amazing! I'm so glad you found inspiration to break your slump. I'm not a writer, but when I was on an overseas study program in the UK, my friend Nettie and I worked on a project about folk music in Scotland. It was by far the most fun I had researching any topic. We went to clubs and festivals and interviewed musicians--and produced an excellent paper.

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    1. Gillian, that is such a wonderful thing to have done. I am very impressed with the research you did on your project and think it must have been great fun interviewing musicians!

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    2. Oh that’s fascinating! Can you tell us more about it?

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    3. Folk music in Scotland?? Dream project! Are you more of a fiddle or tin whistle person? Or a BAGPIPE lover?? (yes to all)

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  7. Margaret, I love to read historical novels. You are a new-to-me author and I am going to look for you books. Your trip to Scotland for research sounds inspired and inspirational, too.

    We went to Scotland for a nature themed vacation several years ago and it was magical. I can easily see how authors would want to set their stories in those magnificent Scottish landscapes.

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    1. Oh Judy, tell us about the nature-themed vacation!

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    2. Hank, it was incredible! We traveled with Natural Habitat Adventures, an outfitter with dozens of trips to fabulous places. Mostly, you need to be fit to go with them since most trips involve hiking to see wildlife in remote areas. It was quite remarkable! I recommend them to anyone who would prefer to travel in small groups (there were about a dozen of us on this one), stay in really nice inns, eat good food and have it all planned for you with transportation, expert guides and focus on wildlife.

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    3. That sounds amazing, Judy! I now have ANOTHER tab open to look into Natural Habitat Adventures....for 2026 😉 Have you tried the Isle of Mull? That's where I dared to join a hiking group sort of like yours and discovered flapjack (nomnomnom) and some lovely people and breathtaking views! 💙

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  8. The above comment about Scottish landscapes was mine. Judy

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  9. The most fascinating, enchanting and unforgettable locale which is unique and extremely historical. Quebec City. I could walk that amazing city forever and never tired of the setting, history and captivating sights. Research there was a dream come true.

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    1. That sounds wonderful--I cannot wait to visit there!

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    2. I love Quebec, though haven't been back for years! My dad's family came from there, a long time ago, and we went on a family trip...magical. That cathedral with the blue linoleum floor and the incredibly lit sacristy--forever memory!

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  10. We visited a number of historic cities in Spain years ago. Fascinating. We were staying overnight in a small town and asked a local what there was to see. Not much, he apologized and said we're only a couple of hundred years old.

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    1. That is so perfect!

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    2. Hahaha, OH EUROPE! Even something 50 years old can be fascinating around here...

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  11. I love Crime Time! Your book sounds fantastic! Do you have a favorite thing about Scotland? Happy Holidays!

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    1. I’m so happy to see you at Crime Time! And so happy you got to “meet” Margaret!

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    2. Oh yay, lovely to see you here 'Shansen' 😊 Favorite thing... I think it's the feeling of being in such a historical funnel, where so much happened, and so much has changed, and what is left is an incredibly atmospheric emptiness (in the hills, not the cities, of course). I wish I could live there for a few months!

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    3. Sounds like a great place to visit!

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  12. Since you asked; no, sadly I have not been to Scotland—yet(!). My daughter’s been twice and a very good friend has been twice and somehow not I; “soon though.

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    1. We are talking about it too!

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    2. If you need tips, you know who to call. AND I would provide a list of baked goods and cooked delicacies to try. Scotland is not in the same category as England, I'm happy to say! 😆

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    3. Oooh thank you!

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  13. Margaret, I love your research planning, and wish I were half so organized! But since I live in Texas and set my books in the UK, I do have to have a pretty good idea what I need to see and do when I visit--and leave some room for the unexpected, those gems of inspiration that I could never have anticipated.

    Although most of my books are set in London and the south of England, I set one book in Scotland (what machinations to get my London-based cops to the Highlands!) and that is the book that jumps out. There is just something magical about Scotland, isn't there? Although my novels are contemporary, this one had a back story set in 1898 and I had to do my historical research. Interesting, now, it's those scenes that really stick with me.

    I downloaded Orla Rafferty Seeks her fortune--what a great premise! I can't wait to read it!

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    1. PS I lived in Scotland, in Edinburgh, but didn't know the Highlands!

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    2. You two need to know each other! Xxxx

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    3. Yes, I'm so happy this post has connected us, Deborah! And yes--two of my other books start out Somewhere Else, but the machinations took me to Scotland, haha! 1898 is such a fascinating period--going to look up now 🤓

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    4. The book is Now May You Weep. So lovely to be connected!

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  14. I also think the title is a great one. The woman's name alone is eye candy, which will entice readers browsing in a bookstore to pick the book up and have a look. Margaret, thank you for sharing how you planned and carried out your research.

    Sometimes I like to go to out-of-the-way places or less well-known places, as well as the popular well-known ones. When my husband was stationed at the Pentagon, I didn't go with him (child still at home), but I did visit as much as I could. One day I decided I wanted to visit the Mary Surratt house outside Clinton, Maryland. Most people are familiar with Mary's notoriety in the assassination of President Abraham Lincoln. For here part in the plot to kill Lincoln, she was the first woman to be executed by the Federal government. At the time of Lincoln's assassination she was living in D.C. and running a boarding house, but her house (which also had a tavern part to it) at Clinton was used in the aftermath of the killing. I was able to see where the guns were stored that John Wilkes Booth and one of his co-conspirators picked up on their fleeing from Washington after killing Lincoln. Mary's husband was dead, so he had no part in the conspiracy, but Mary's son was in the thick of it, as was Mary. Anyway, at the time you could only visit part of the first floor, but it was interesting. The tavern part was rather small and it was in that part, in a panel of the wall, where the guns were hidden. Mary's husband had the house built in 1851- 52. It's definitely a place you need to check on the times open. Right now it's closed Monday-Wednesday and research is by appointment. To me, it was fascinating to stand in the tavern part and imagine John Wilkes Booth stride through the door, demanding that John Lloyd, Mary''s tenant, hand over the "shooting irons" and binoculars (Wilkes had given the binoculars to Mary in Washington). I'm sure he must have been in a hurry, as he was trying to escape capture, but I wonder if he had John Lloyd pour him some liquid courage before he went on his way. I love to stand where people in history have stood.

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    1. Yes, exactly! Now what are shooting irons?? Sounds like a mix between golf and hunting equipment 😆

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    2. That is absolutely chilling. And yes, I would love to know how you chose the name, Margaret!

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  15. Wow! I am impressed with your research, Margaret. Lucy's Key West descriptions are so authentic that I can't wait for her to take me back there as I can't visit there often enough. She really keeps me waiting for more as I turn each page! Happy Holidays!

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  16. I love love love reading about new authors - it is so wonderful and I've "discovered" so many new writers and books. However, sometimes it is about the "7 smart and sassy crime fiction writers dish on writing and life." I miss not reading about my 7 favorite writers' lives and activities. I wonder if we might have both but keep the JRW and add a JRW and what we are writing and recommending?

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  17. Kathleen Ann GardinerDecember 22, 2024 at 3:42 PM

    I love research too. I did research on Japanese gardens for my paper in high school and got an A++ on it. I loved it! I would love to read your book!

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    1. What an excellent topic! I love the time I've spent in the Japanese Garden here in Portland, OR--so peaceful.

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  18. I've always been fascinated by the Antebellum South and one year we took a cruise on the Delta Queen on the Mississippi River and we learned so much history both from lectures on the boat and the tours we took that we learned a lot about the South.

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    1. Oh so chilling— and what a wonderful way to find out how things change and why.

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  19. Wonderful! Have you tried reading books from the period? I find myself often getting turned off by the different mores of the time, but I do try!

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    1. I suppose you have to look at it as research….

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  20. welcome to Jungle Reds and congratulations on your novel, Margaret!

    Your research trip sounds like an excellent adventure! I am seriously considering research trips in my future for my novel in progress.

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    1. It can’t hurt, of course! :-)

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    2. Thank you, Diana! And I would definitely recommend! 💖

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  21. Is it hard deciding what research you uncover can and can’t fit into your books? I always find I want to include everything I find out, even if it doesn’t really fit 😬

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    1. Yes, most definitely! There was so much captured, and now it's just hanging out in my brain, waiting for another opportunity to leap out, lol

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  22. I just visited the Vietnam Wall. Powerful. Finally found my stepbrother’s name after many years of searching. Tearfully powerful. Then put my hand on the wall and it was unbelievably warm, even on a bitter cold overcast day. Extremely powerful. I’ll use it for my memory stories.

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    1. That's a beautiful connection to a special place, Laurie. 💖

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  23. What a fascinating story! I would love to do a research trip like this! Hmmmm…

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    1. What's your first idea, Christine? Is it somewhere you've been thinking about for a long time, or a moment of random inspiration? ;D

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