Wednesday, January 29, 2025

Rhys has just finished a first draft.

 RHYS BOWEN:  Big sigh of relief here. I've just finished the first draft of the latest Royal Spyness novel, called From Cradle to Grave.  Actually I really enjoy writing these books. I suppose I like the characters and am interested in what they plan to do next, and I do like a good chuckle when Queenie does something awful or Georgie is clumsy. I think readers of the series will find this story particularly satisfying (I'm not going to say why, but you'll know when you read it).

I think I shared a snippet with you before about the arrival of the nanny from hell. This is only the beginning of Georgie's nightmares. Following the nanny her sister-in-law Fig arrives unexpectedly to make sure that nanny settles in properly and to give Georgie a few instructions on how to run her house. This does not go well.

I felt it was important to see how Georgie tries to balance motherhood with challenges of a life beyond the house--something so many of us have faced. And the pull of the outside world is extra strong in this book as she hears about a tragic death of a contemporary of Darcy's, then another. When there is a third death within a few weeks she starts to wonder if these were not accidents after all. Is somebody killing off he sons of the British upper class? Then the next question: Is Darcy on that list?

So it's quite a tense book, with a nanny who is infuriating her at home and cases she wants to help to solve, but Queenie's escapades create a side plot, including some fun moments like this one:

My former maid Queenie, now our assistant cook, burst into the room giving her usual impression of a runaway cart horse. The cups rattled alarmingly as she skidded to a halt, staring at the visitor open mouthed. “Oh blimey,” she said. “I didn’t realize you’d got company. I’d have put a slice of my lardy cake with the tea things.” Her cap was askew and one of the front buttons of her dress uniform had come undone or had split open, revealing a hint of rather gray and unappealing undergarment.

                “That’s quite alright, Queenie,” I said. “This is Nanny Hardbottle. She has come to take care of master James.”

                “But I thought you said you didn’t want no nanny,” Queenie went on in her usual tactless way. “You said no dried up old prune was going to raise your child. I heard you myself.”

                “That will be all, Queenie,” I said. “Please put the tray down carefully on the little table.”

                “I can be mother, if you like,” she said.

                “No. I can manage, thank you.” My gaze told her that the sooner she left the better. Queenie was never quick on social cues. “I don’t mind at all,” she said. “I ain’t got nothing more to do since I already peeled tonight’s spuds and chef is making one of them Frenchie puddings tonight. He called it a po de crème.” She giggled at the mention of the word po. Cockneys seemed to find the mention of anything to do with lavatories or bodily functions highly amusing.

                “You may go, Queenie,” I said.

                “Bob’s yer uncle then.” She gave Nanny Hardbottle a big grin. “Nice to meet you, I’m sure.”  The vases and statues rattled as she clomped out.

                There was a silence as I poured two cups of tea.

                “What an extraordinary woman,” Nanny Hardbottle said. “Who on earth is she? Surely not one of your maids?”

                “My assistant cook,” I replied. “I’m afraid she’s a little unorthodox. But she does bake rather well. Usually we keep her safely in the kitchen, but I expect the other servants were occupied elsewhere, or, knowing Queenie, she took it upon herself to bring up the tea.”

                “Extraordinary,” Nanny Hardbottle repeated. “Your housekeeper seems a competent woman. Can she not teach this person the rudiments of polite behavior?”

                I had to smile.  “She has tried, I’m sure. We have all tried. Either nothing sinks in or Queenie deliberately doesn’t want to learn.”

                “Then why not give her the sack?”

                “Because she was once my maid and she was awfully brave. She saved my life in Romania. I feel responsible for her. And as I said, she does make rather good cakes and biscuits.”

                Nanny Hardbottle said nothing this time, merely shaking her head.  I handed her a cup of tea. She sipped suspiciously, as if Queenie might have done something unmentionable to it.

It is always a juggling act when I write to insert humor to what is otherwise a tense story. It can never take away from the gravity of the situation but can relieve an overwhelming amount of tension. When I read I like this approach. The Lord of the Rings, one of my all-time favorites, has those sweet and gentle scenes with Hobbits being simple country boys amid terror and despair. This keeps it feeling human and relatable. Interestingly enough these scenes are lacking in the movie version, and the films are entirely fight or flight and thus not as appealing to me.

What do you feel about humor in mysteries? Would you rather the author just got on with the plot?




52 comments:

  1. I enjoy a bit of humor in the telling of the tale . . . it definitely adds to the story.
    Queenie's obliviousness in this scene made me smile, Rhys . . . thanks for sharing it with us.

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  2. I do love humor, even in the most serious books. And I'm with Joan. Queenie's scene gave me a much-needed smile this morning.

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  3. Oh I definitely enjoy the bits of humor breaking things up! Queenie is precious and relatable.

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    1. Is it possible that some readers might misconstrue Queenie’s offer to be mother as offering to be the nanny rather than offering to pour the tea? It would be very few of your readers, if any, I’m certain, but the thought did occur to me.

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    2. You are right, Brenda. When I first heard that phrase years ago I had no idea what it meant. Then, after seeing it on TV shows and reading it, it gradually became clear to me.

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    3. You’re right. It’s so common in England to say that but non British readers might not get it

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  4. Bring on the humor, especially in this political atmosphere! I love Queenie's irreverence. And congratulations on finishing the first draft - that's always a great feeling.

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    1. Oh yes. Anything to escape right now!

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  5. Sounds great, and I'm looking forward to it.
    Every time I finish a first draft I immediately pour myself a second.

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    1. From Celia: of course Jerry, one should always say Yes to the other half.

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  6. I prefer some humor, even in the most serious of mysteries but it's a balance. I think that this series is exemplary of injecting humor the story. Queenie isn't the only comic relief in this series since Georgie's wry sense of humor shines through every passage. With wit and sacasm, clever analogies and biting observations, she is the storyteller and we see it all through her eyes.
    Love the passage. I can't wait to see how Georgie takes on the challenge of this intruder in her life.

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  7. I like humor in stories, and especially in mysteries, and I enjoyed how it was injected in this scene. This sounds like a fun series.

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  8. Dorothy from WinnipegJanuary 29, 2025 at 7:43 AM

    Congratulations on finishing the first draft. I can hardly wait to get my hands on this book! The way you inject humour into your Royal Spyness series is exemplary. A little humour, even in the names of some of your characters doesn’t hurt the storyline at all! Go Georgie! ❤️📚

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    1. The character names are such fun to think up. Nanny Hardbottle just came to me!

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  9. You balance things perfectly Rhys, I love this scene!

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  10. RHYS: i do enjoy the humour in these books. I don't want Queenie to change.

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  11. Oh, Queenie, never change. What I love most about this character is her simple refusal to see caste as a real thing. Which, after all, it isn't; it's a human construct, like many other of the phony separators of human beings as "better" or "less than". She speaks truth, and Georgie, with her commoner Granddad, subversively allows it. I always get a kick out of this subtle comment on the idea of "class".

    And yes to the humor, especially as a way to relieve tension. These last few years have brought enough of that in my life, and I look to my entertainment as a way to vent and forget about the outside drama for a bit. So thanks for that, too, Rhys.

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    1. Karen I wanted this series to be all about class and the way. It has shaped British society

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  12. We can always count on Queenie to provide some humor. Just as we can always count on Fig to be a royal pain in the posterior!

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    1. Both will play big roles in this book!

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  13. Keep the humor coming, Rhys! Please.

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  14. From Celia: Someone else, was it Edith, commented on the importance of humor in our daily lives, particularly now, and I agree. Consider late night shows. I don't stay up the late, but going to sleep on a tide of laughter must be good for us.
    I love your Georgie books Rhys and Queenie is unique. Balancing her cluelessness against her bravery is what gives her place its importance. A comparison with Fig just adds to the enjoyment.

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    1. She has to be there for a reason, doesn’t she?

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  15. I, too, really appreciate humor interrupting the tension of a good mystery. In fact I think that's why I rarely choose mysteries in the "thriller" genre, because they don't include any break in the tension.

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    1. I think I agree with that. I find thrillers much harder to read and usually race through them rather than savor them

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  16. Laughed at the scene, especially Nanny Hardbottle's reaction to Queenie! I really appreciate humor in mysteries. I still remember novels with sprinkles of humor in the story. Thank you for sharing that snippet. Humor is important in our daily lives, especially these days. Queenie always makes me laugh. And so do other characters like Fig and Claire, especially her witty barbs. And I love how you create names to fit the characters. Hardbottle is very fitting for that Nanny's personality.

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    1. British names are so silly it’s not hard to find good ones

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  17. I, too, appreciate the humor in the mysteries. I can just picture Nanny Hardbottle’s nose in the air when she meets Queenie.
    Dianne

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  18. Rhys, you are so fabulous! And I truly admire the depth of your thought process and what comes out as so seamlessly entertaining. I have to stop now because our power is out and I’m saving phone battery… Love you all!

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    1. Take care! I’m driving to Phoenix. Actually Dominic is driving. I’m not!

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  19. I love the bits of humor relieving the tension. And yours is so droll and clever, Rhys!

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  20. I love humor in just about every genre. There is so much in life that is worthy of sarcasm and a laugh or two. To ignore that is to miss out on a piece of humanity that keeps us sane. Of course, this opinion could be influenced by the fact that I am a very sarcastic soul and love trading barbs with folks.

    I thoroughly enjoyed this glimpse into the next Royal Spyness book. I love Queenie and have come to think of her as a walking train wreck with a big heart. What a wonderful cast of characters you have created in this series. Congratulations on finishing this draft! -- Victoria

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  21. Rhys, I laughed out loud when I got to, "What an extraordinary woman." I could hear the nanny's voice in that phrase! And yes, I love bits of humor amidst the tension of murder - in part because it's so lifelike. Anyone who has ever caught the giggles at a wake will know how it works.

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    1. That’s so true. My FIL nearly fell into his wife’s grave causing much merriment!

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  22. Thank you for this snippet Rhys. It’s so enjoyable. I’m looking forward to reading this book.
    I like humour in every genre of books that I’m reading. I try to stay away from too dark novels.
    Danielle

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  23. I enjoy humor in mysteries. I buy some series because of it.

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  24. I agree with Victoria and Danielle about sarcasm and humor in what I read. I don’t think I read dark subjects very often, either. Even if I am reading a traditional mystery, I enjoy a sarcastic comment or bit of humor to relieve the tension of whatever situation the author is describing. (And I, too, enjoyed snippet you shared, Rhys!) — Pat S

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  25. Getting the right sort and amount of humor into mysteries is hard. Mick Herron does it brilliantly in his Slough House series, although they aren't precisely murder mysteries. Judging from this excerpt and the books I've read by you, Rhys, you are good at striking the balance.

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  26. Oh, that Queenie! I am positive she uses obtuseness to disguise her stubbornness. She wants to know everything that is going on. And Georgie puts up with it. How long before she gets rid of the nanny from hell? As for humor, yes. Everywhere, please.

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  27. As in real life, the insertion of humor in the middle of turmoil and difficulties is a sigh of relief and respite. So, yes, I believe that comedy, especially satire, has its place among books and film. I always loved the James Bond movies with Roger Moore as the main character because he never took himself seriously and loved to inject sarcasm in his dialogue. My favorite line in "For Your Eyes Only" as the little yellow car he is driving is tumbling down a steep hill through olive trees with a Bond girl passenger is "I love a drive in the country...Don't you?" (You can see the actress Carole Bouquet let out a brief chuckle.) So why not tongue-in-check lines and humor in murder/ mystery books especially when it's written around an especially challenging and tension-filled moment. Queenie's down-to-earth, say-it-like-it-is delivery is quite refreshing...Congratulations on completing the First Draft of "From Cradle to Grave", Rhys!

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    1. I think. British understatement lends itself to well to humor

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    2. I agree! And no one can top British humor...It's the Best!!!!

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  28. Love the excerpt, Rhys- and I thoroughly enjoy the humor in your books because it's always sly and part of the characters. Humor is essential to any good story. It's how much and where.

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  29. I adore this, Rhys!! Cannot wait to read this one, after having recently listened to the entire series on Audible. I love the humor and don't choose to read things that are unrelievedly dark. I remember how disappointed I was in the film version of LOTR because they left out all my favorite bits!

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  30. Personallyh, I love humor in anything (especially Supreme Court opinions, but that's another story). I especially like sly humor inserted by the author that's a gift to certain readers, whether they be fans or family or friends who share certain interests.

    But I have never done a first draft of an entire book. I do each chapter over a second time, usually a day after essentially dumping it onto the manuscript, and I may go back and adjust a line or two as I write the rest, but by the time I get to the end, that's the finished manuscript, what I send in. The editor may request changes, of course, but by the time I get to the end, I know what gaps I need to fill in, and do so, and then no rewrites by me except to satisfy editorial requests. I suppose each chapter has thus had a first and then second draft en route, but not the whole book.

    That is not to say that I haven't discovered something missing as late as during the indexing process (I always do my own index, because I don't want the cost to come out of my advance-- and because it gives me one last kick at the can). In one edition of my copyright book (probably the first), I wanted to list a "see also," and after rereading the entire book (it's short) in a panic, I discovered that I'd left out something minor but important. I wrote up what I wanted to cover, found a space for it that made sense near the end of one chapter (so the pagination wouldn't have to change) and sent the correction through. No penalty because it didn't reach the minimum specified in the contract that would have triggered one. Bur if I hadn't caught it in the indexing process.... Of course, fiction books don't have indices, but maybe it might be helpful to create one to make sure one had included everything intended?

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  31. Maybe I missed a post, but I am no longer seeing your posts on Facebook. Did you stop posting there? Miss reading the latest updates!

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  32. Oh Queenie, you are a treasure. I can't believe that Queenie irritated me somewhat when she first came on the scene. Now, I love when she arrives in a scene. And, this scene was so great, with the characters of Queenie, Georgie, and Nanny Hardbottle all together. I could really visualize it. It was hilarious. I can't wait to see Queenie pitted against Nanny Hardbottle, and the name Hardbottle is so clever and funny. Your stories always bring the characters and their personalities alive for the readers, Rhys.

    These days I seem to enjoy humor in my mystery reading more and more. I just can't read anything too dark right now, or I don't think I can.

    I also wanted to congratulate Hank on the People article, and the cover of your book is absolutely stunning. I was imagining when you said the idea came to you after signing a book just what the look on your face was. Or was there a big bubble over your head with a light bulb inside. I think this book is going to be one of your best.

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