“What is originality? It is being oneself, and reporting accurately what we see and are.”
--Ralph Waldo Emerson
LUCY BURDETTE: A few weeks ago I took a Sisters in Crime workshop online from Paula Munier on the subject of plotting. (I'm always looking for help on that subject!) I enjoyed it so much that I persuaded Paula to share some of her 'secrets' with you!
PAULA MUNIER: Be yourself. Advice we hear from the day we’re born from everyone from our mothers and teachers to our ancient philosophers and present-day Ted Talk pundits. It’s good advice for artists, too—and now that getting paid for making art is more difficult than ever and AI and other forms of copyright infringement abound, being ourselves might be the only thing that can save us.
Whether you paint or sculpt, craft or compose or choreograph, design or dance, or write, as I do, originality is now our best weapon in the war against human creativity. As someone once said (maybe Oscar Wilde, maybe Thomas Merton, maybe someone else altogether), “Be yourself; everyone else is taken.” I was reminded of this by the one and only Matt Weiner, writer and producer and creator of Mad Men. I recently took a class from him on ideas and the imagination through the Los Angeles Review of Books, and in that class, he encouraged us to note the things what we liked, and to write them down in a notebook.
Of course, I’m doing it—I’m doing everything Matt told us to do—and was reassured by his advice because I do something similar every time I need to jump-start my imagination. When I don’t know what to write, I remember My Writing Rule of Three:
1) Write what you know.
2) Write what you love.
3) Write what you’d love to know.
Taking that rule further, I use a bubble chart I created while writing Plot Perfect. It’s a list-making exercise, basically, a brainstorming strategy for artists regardless of medium. Here it is:
When you don’t know what to write or paint or sculpt or craft or compose or choreograph, do the bubble chart. The lists serve as a kind of X-ray of your likes and dislikes, your beliefs and your values, your past, present, and future selves. In short: What makes you, you.
From Bubble Chart Lists to the Bestseller Lists
I have the bubble chart to thank for my Mercy Carr mysteries. I’d always wanted to write mysteries, ever since reading the Bobbsey Twins and Nancy Drew and Sherlock Holmes as a kid. I had several unfinished manuscripts in the proverbial drawer. Meanwhile, I’d published a lot of nonfiction, and acquired a lot of nonfiction and fiction projects as an acquisitions editor and as an agent. But my dream of writing a mystery series eluded me.
Then Phil Sexton asked me to write a book called The Writer’s Guide to Beginnings for Writer’s Digest Books. I needed a first chapter that I could use to illustrate certain fictional techniques and revision strategies. I couldn’t use anyone else’s first chapter for that purpose, so I wrote an opening chapter of a mystery—and I threw in everything I knew and loved and would love to know, working straight from my bubble chart’s lists. I grew up in a military family, so I made my heroine, Mercy Carr, a former MP who’d served in Afghanistan. I love dogs, so I gave her a canine companion named Elvis. I love the woods of northern New England, so I set the story in Vermont’s Green Mountains. I love stories about foundlings—from the Bible’s Moses to Anita Shreve’s Light on Snow to Julia Spencer-Fleming’s In the Bleak Midwinter—so I opened the story with Mercy and Elvis finding a baby abandoned in the forest. I even threw in a little Shakespeare because the bard is, well, The Bard.
Long story short: My agent read The Writer’s Guide to Beginnings, and said: “That’s a good opening chapter. You should write that mystery and I’ll sell it.” Armed with my bubble chart lists, I finished A Borrowing of Bones, the first book in my Mercy Carr series—and it made the USA TODAY Bestseller List. The first chapter of that novel is the first chapter that appeared in the writing book, with very few changes. The seventh book, The Snow Lies Deep, comes out in December. I’m working on Book #8 as we speak.
It’s All About You
As human beings, we can’t help but admire and appreciate originality, especially in our artists. Look upon a Matisse, and we admire and appreciate his unique mastery of color. Listen to Bob Dylan, and we admire and appreciate his personal yet profound lyrics. Read Alice Hoffman, and we admire and appreciate her particular illumination of the mystical and magical and mysterious aspects of life. These individual qualities inform these artists’ work and make their work special.
The good news is: We are all originals. We owe it to ourselves and our art and the world at large to make the most of that originality. So, go ahead: Be yourself.
LUCY: Thanks Paula! And now it's your turn Reds, what would be on your bubble chart?
PAULA MUNIER is the Senior Agent and Director of Storytelling for Talcott Notch Literary and the USA TODAY bestselling author of the Mercy Carr mysteries. A Borrowing of Bones, the first in the series, was nominated for the Mary Higgins Clark Award and named the Dogwise Book of the Year. Blind Search also won a Dogwise Award. The Hiding Place and The Wedding Plot both appeared on several “Best Of” lists. Home at Night was named Library Journal’s Mystery Pick of the Month. The Night Woods, the sixth book in the series, debuted in October 2024, earning a starred Library Journal review among other acclaim. THE SNOW LIES DEEP debuts in December. Along with her love of nature, Paula credits the hero dogs of Mission K9 Rescue, her own rescue dogs, and a deep affection for New England as her series’ major influences. She’s also written three popular books on writing: Plot Perfect, The Writer’s Guide to Beginnings, and Writing with Quiet Hands, as well as Happier Every Day and the memoir Fixing Freddie: The True Story of a Boy, a Mom, and a Very, Very Bad Beagle. She lives in New England with her family and four rescue dogs and Ursula The Cat, a rescue torbie tabby who does not think much of the dogs. For more, check out www.paulamunier.com.
This is so interesting, Paula . . . thanks for sharing it with us. I'm looking forward to reading "The Snow Lies Deep" . . . perhaps you could tell us a little about the story?
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for asking. It was a fun story to write, set in December, so I got to play with all the holiday tropes--from the winter solstice to Santa Claus and snowy fairy tales....Let's just say in the seventh Mercy Carr mystery she's up to her elbows in merry murder!
DeleteI love the bubble chart, Paula, and just printed it out! I've used settings I know for various of my series, plus people I've loved along with aspects of unpleasant people, but there's so much more to mine in some of those bubbles.
ReplyDeleteYes, we all have so much to mine that we don't even think about because it's so famliiar to us. But there's gold in them thar hills!
DeleteThanks for highlighting Paula - I love her books!
ReplyDeleteAwww thank you so much! Lovely of you to say!
DeleteBe yourself, or stay true to yourself, sounds like good advice. But some artists are not accepted by the masses for their originality at first.
ReplyDeleteFor example, I recently watched "A COMPLETE UNKNOWN", an American biopic musical drama about Bob Dylan starring Timonthée Chalamet. Dylan hung out with Woody Guthrie, Joan Baez & Pete Seeger early in his folk music career. But Dylan hated that early stardom since it meant his artistic freedom was limited by the expectations of the folk music community. His early experimentation with other music was not accepted.
I LOVED that movie. Dylan is one of The Greats, and they are often musunderstood. The price of genius, no?
DeleteWhat a great bubble chart. Thanks for sharing it! I printed off a copy to refer to. I love how you wove things from the chart into your sample first chapter that because a real first chapter of a mystery. (Military, dogs, woods, foundlings, etc.) The Mercy Carr series sounds like a must read.
ReplyDeleteAs for what to put in my chart: Where I'm living right now is the setting I've come to know (Braga, Portugal.) (Originally it was #3 in your original list: "Things I'd like to know.") I'm now intrigued about how to put the chart to good use for future books and stories.
That was supposed to be became, not because. Elizabeth Varadan
DeleteHow wonderful! My daughter lives in Switzerland and her boyfriend is Portuguese, and she loves Portugal. We hope to go visit soon...and if I may, whenever you move to a new place, you're destined to write a fish out of water story. I'm just saying....
DeleteOohhh, that sounds promising! Elizabeth
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DeleteGO FOR IT!
DeleteThat's a great story! I wondered how you moved from nonfiction to fiction.
ReplyDeleteI was a reporter and then a nonfiction writer and editor but I always wrote fiction, mostly very bad fiction, in my spare time. It took me a long time to learn to show and not tell. But I lived in California for many years when I was younger and all my writer friends wanted to be screenwriters so I tagged along to all their screenwriting classes and that taught me how to write a scene. And I took so many classes and joined MWA and SinC and ITW and met allthese fabulous authors--HELLO, Jungle Reds!--and they encouraged me. I had a lot of half-finished novels in my drawer and the ever-wise Hallie Ephron said to me, "You knwo what your problem is? You never finish." When Hallie talks, I listen!
DeleteA question: Are you making the leap from nonfiction to fiction? How's it going?
DeleteWelcome back to Jungle Reds, Paula! Thank you for sharing your Bubble Chart. Great advice for writing. In my writing, like Edith Maxwell, I have thought about the settings for my characters. Since my story will be a classical / cozy mystery set in the 1920s, there is historical research involved.
ReplyDeleteYour Mercy Carr novels sound intriguing. May I ask if you were the casting director for a movie or tv series based on your Mercy Carr novels, which actress would you pick to play Mercy Carr?
Oooh such a good question. Some splendid, tough, smart redhead (Mercy is a redhead, as I will be in my next life) like Jessica Chastain or Rose Leslie....
DeleteDo you cast your characters as you write them? I sometimes do, but they're usually composites of people I've in real life....
DeleteThis looks like a really useful tool, Paula, thank you! By the way, I really enjoy your Mercy Carr books, and want to give Elvis and Susie Bear some cuddles, you make them so appealing.
ReplyDeleteMy bubble items would have to include gardening, sewing, and cooking. Geez, kind of boring. Why can't I have experience as a glamorous international femme fatale secretly working for Interpol?
Thank you for the kind words. As for your bubble chart: Think of all your poisonous plants, there's a murder waiting to happen. (That Potent Plants garden at the Torre Abbey in Devon, where Agatha Christie spent much of her life is on my bucket list.) Sewing, well, The Silence of the Lambs comes to mind. And cooking! From like Water for Chocolate to Joanna Fluke and all manner of fiction in between! Let me tell you, speaking as an agent, if you can write food, you can sell!
DeleteThank you! Hmm, food (ha) for thought here!
DeleteIndeed! Let us know what you come up with....
DeletePaula, congratulations on The Snow Lies Deep! I realized reading this that I'm behind on Mercy and Elvis's adventures. But, hey, that just means more good books await me!
ReplyDeleteI like your bubble chart--I've always thought the simple advice to 'write what you know' seemed so constraining. I mean, am I only allowed to write about an archaeologist? That's what I worked so hard to know, for sure. But intuitively, what I know covers so much more. Your chart gives much-needed clarity to that concept. What do I know in my heart? What do I know of nature? Of people I've loved, people I never knew, but who are part of the long, time trail of family? It turns out, 'what I know' covers a lot of territory!
I'll say. Not to mention that being an archaeologist!!??!! already puts you way ahead of most of us LOL
DeleteI love this! I just read Timothy Snyder's book On Freedom and he talks a lot about how on-line life spies on us and pushes algorithms of what it thinks it knows about our preferences. He encourages people to be "unpredictable" as well as creative. Knowing who we are and being able to express it and continue to question what we are told all seem very important these days.
ReplyDeleteI have to read that. Thanks for the book rec. My son gave me his
DeleteOn Tyranny, which is a classic.
That bubble chart is really interesting. I bet you could use it coaxing family to tell their tales. I'm looking forward to the next Mercy and Elvis book
ReplyDeleteThat is an absolutely genius and brilliant idea! Seriously. Brilliant.
DeleteAbsolutely! doing these lists can trigger all sorts of memories, memories we need to capture while we can.
DeleteThis is so intriguing! I love how it gets the brain going!
ReplyDeleteUh, your brain is always going, Hank LOL
DeleteMany many hamsters:-)
DeleteI had never created a bubble chart until I read Plot Perfect. Now I have a notebook full of them.
ReplyDeleteThat was a fabulous webinar, by the way. See you in Bethesda!
Aww you are too kind. You've got a wonderful body of work--and more to come! See you soon!
DeleteLove the bubble chart. I am woefully behind on the Mercy Carr series. There is always something I'm behind on.
ReplyDeleteMy chart would include mountains, rivers, dogs, flowers (but not necessarily gardening), forests, friends, and good food. I think I've managed to include most of those in my writing.
All great material for stories. And weaving it into the stories is so much fun! Enjoy!
DeleteSo brilliant: the bubble chart! Mine would include FOOD. Parapsychology. (yup) Birds. And... I think it's the book I haven't yet written. Thanks for the nudge, Paula! And I have PLOT PERFECT right here on my shelf. It's terrific.
ReplyDeleteWhat a dream of a story that will be! Can't wait to read it!
DeleteI'm excited for another Mercy Carr book. I love them and devour them as soon as they hit my local library. Your bubble chart reminded me of something a priest friend of mine told me years ago. We were talking about being holy and what that meant. He felt it meant being the best you that you could be. I wonder what it would be like to capture a variety of characters being the "best" them that they could be. What would the protagonist's "best" be? Supporting characters? Would it evolve in the book or stay static? Look at what you've cut loose here! -- Victoria
ReplyDeleteI LOVE this! I've been listening to the audiobook The Hero's Journey with Joseph Campbell, reminding me that in that journey, the heroine must face obstacles that over the course of story challenge her to become her very best self. A sacred journey, indeed! You must write that story, the world needs inspiring stories about good people doing the right thing.....
DeleteSomehow my brain does not work with bubbles. I'm not sure why, as I'm the Queen of Lists. I just don't visualize that way. But I have really appreciated my copy of PLOT PERFECT. Thank you. (Selden)
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure! And do keep on making those lists! There's magic in them!
DeletePaula, I love your Mercy Carr series. I own, but have not yet read, Fixing Freddie, which I sought out because I enjoy your writing style so much.
ReplyDeleteI think Pat D’s idea of using the bubbles to get (especially older) family members to share their experiences is spot on. It also seems like it would be a good start for interview questions instead of the usual “where do you see yourself in five or ten years”. You might get a better insight into the job candidates! — Pat S
What a cool idea. Some of the questions would be bound to give job candidates pause LOL
DeleteLoved the recent SinC webinar--thanks, Paula! Would definitely recommend reading PLOT PERFECT if you haven't already. For my bubble chart, like Hallie, food is on the list (cooking, eating, helping in our family restaurant).
ReplyDeleteAww thank you. You're the perfect example of an author who knows how to write about food! And who can resist titles like Star-Crossed Egg Tarts! You're rocking it!
DeleteI LOVE this approach and am grateful to have this graphic as a guide and to know about Munier's work. I too have longed to write a mystery since discovering Nancy Drew. Recently a long-time friend and I fulfilled our promise to each other (in our 30s) that we finally fulfilled (in our 70s) and I just want to say that co-writing with the right person also generates originality in plot because of how inidividual creativities interact. Not The Trip We Planned was not at all the trip we planned at the outset but better for the ways two imaginations led to new destinations.
ReplyDeleteIt's never too late! I was a grandmother when I published ny first Mercy Carr mystery. And now I'm writing #8....I love the idea of "individual creativities" interacting. What's your process of co-authoring like?
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