At that point I recognized how much the new novel was moving into areas I hadn’t explored before. After acknowledging that, I decided to do one more thing I’d been meaning to do, and make my main character a woman.
All of my books have had female characters in them, many of
them playing key roles, but until now my protagonists have all been male. Having
decided to stretch my writing in both genre and location, it seemed appropriate
to add one more challenge and cast a different gender in the starring role.
Oddly enough, the toughest part of doing that was the decision to go ahead and try.
I discovered something important while building the story of
Angie Morse, a grad student combing the New England
woods for a lost stone obelisk. When writing stories of supernatural horror and
creating protagonists of a different gender, the same admonition applies: Don’t
overdo it.
Here’s what I mean: Describing the scratching sounds in the
wall of the silent library is far more frightening than simply having the Thing
leap out and attack. And focusing on the presentation of a main character who
is relatable and engaging is far more productive than layering the role with
thoughts, discussions, and actions that allegedly represent the character’s
gender.
Creating a protagonist who is complex and interesting makes
it simple to then weave indications of gender into the story, and this in turn
lets the character behave naturally.
Instead of leaning on stereotypes, this
approach allowed me to turn Angie loose on her quest and let her demonstrate
what she was all about. Mentally tough but abundantly human, highly driven
(some would say obsessed) but shrewdly calculating, she’s willing to take some chances
in order to accomplish something beyond the norm.
Stretching herself in order to possibly achieve something
both transcendent and valuable. Now why does that sound so familiar?
ROSEMARY: More good advice from good pal, Vincent O'Neil. If you're lucky enough to be going to the New England Crimebake this fall, check out his workshop on self-publishing and thank him in person. If you're not going, please visit his website at www.vincenthoneil.com